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By : anemonefrost
  • From ANON - MrsMonaghanBoyd on August 20, 2004
    OH MY GOD! I don't usually like rape stories, (ESPECIALLY IF IT IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTORS IN THE WHOLE LOTR STORY! MERRY AND PIPPIN! (IN THE MOVIE, PLAYED BY MY FAVORITE ACTORS! DOM MONAGAHAN AND BILLY BOYD!)) but this is REALLY REALLY good! PLEASE wrote more SOON! I LOVE this story!
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  • From chloeamethyst on August 02, 2003
    Ch. 2. I hadn't seen this fic before and am glad to have found it. I like the way Merry & Pip are characterized--they aren't simpering idiot victims in this tale, but have a strong sense of themselves despite undergoing brutality. I especially liked the way you handled Pip figuring out what really happened to Merry, without him having to come right out and say it. And I like the heroic elements in each cctercter as they sacrifice their own well-being to protect the other as much they can, given the circumstances. The fic needs some proofreading for verb tense shifts and typos, and it's "uruk" rather than "urak". But I love it so far and can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - emma on August 01, 2003
    I remember reading this a long time ago! It is very good, and oh-so-angsty. Did you ever end it? I hope you do, because it is very good!
    -emma
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  • From ANON - Mistress Brandybuck on July 30, 2003
    Well Anemone you've done it again. I really hate uruks and orcs, as I said before, even more now. You've played on one of my biggest fears, I'm terrified of water and drowning, can't even stick my head in the bath without paniking! Poor Pippin, poor, poor, precious Pippin, he's caught a cold or something worse??? want to wrap him *and Merry* in a nice warm blanket and feed them nice hot soup. Can I, can I, pretty please lol ;-P
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  • From ANON - Anna on July 29, 2003
    A nice start to what appears will be a great fic. Nice use of description. This fic is worth far more than three stars. More like five. Keep up the wonderful work. I want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Gabby on July 29, 2003
    Though I am sure they are out there, is the first time i have actually seen a M and P/ orc rape fic. No one ever *said* orc penises were huge, i only just assumed they were. Poor little guys. Golly!! Lets just say I hope when they get to Fangorn forest they find the Ent drafts to be very healing. Are you planning to write this into a hurt/comfort?

    You might want to check your tenses- you slip into the present tense sometimes which is slightly distracting. Anyway i am curious to see how this story progresses. It would really be a bummer if MErry doesn't tell Pippin what happened to him and then they next night he has to endure the same torture.
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