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By : Orlisgirl

From ANON - Acids on August 24, 2003

Well done, like it.
Going to wait for the next chapter, hopefully with all the sadism in it ...

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From ANON - Erica on August 23, 2003
This story is really good, screw all those flamers. If they don't like it they shouldn't even be here. ADULTfanfiction.net. Anyways, I hope you keep it up.
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From ANON - b2 on August 23, 2003
I like it's different form all those other stories around the web. keep going and forget those people that flame u they know what they are doing when they came into the site. Update soon
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From OrlisLover on August 23, 2003
Hey!!!
Awesome chapter! I'm so glad you got it up so fast! I think that you've done an awesome job, and this chapter was written realell.ell. Now, the only problelm will be that I wt bet be able to stand it until your next chapter is up!!! So write soon!!! I love this story and I hope that the flamers (though there shouldn't be any after ALL of those WARNINGS!) don't get to you-they aren't worth it.... So yeah-write soon! Can't wait!
Cheers!
Orli's Lover
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From ANON - Brazgirl on August 22, 2003
Wow! I loved the last paragraph! It was great. Really good to know you are back and writting. I can't wait to see the next chapter!!!
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From ANON - Orli\'s Lover on August 17, 2003
Ok-I just wanted to say to Orli's Girl...sorry if I sounded a bit stand offish (is that the right word?) or maybe just very straight-forward to your flamers-I just HAD to say something...Oh-and sorry about the spelling-In myn my basement, it's cold, and I'm shivering like crazy...must go put on sweater.....
Cheers!
Orli's Lover *-*
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From ANON - Orli\'s Lover on August 17, 2003
To Orli's Girl-You can't listen to the crap that people say about your story...that's just what it is-crap. Don't let it get you down because it's not worth it. I thnk that you are a great writer and convey emotions wonderfully and you MUST write and update soon!

To Everyone Else Who Flamed: Seriously! Who do you think you are! You go into this site knowing full well that this is adultfanfiction! Seriously-there's bound to be stuff like rape and incest and bondage and whatever going on! Look at the banners-Wonder Woman is bound up with her own whip! The summary of this story told you exactly what it was and I think that yo should cut her some slack! This is supposed to be an AU fic! Right? So she changes a couple of things-like...Elves can get raped and not die...and they can abuse their children...and all that crap! I think that some of you are going a bit too far-this is her fic and she can write it how she wants. KNO KNOWS that rape is serious (who the heck DOESN'T???) so don't rail on her that she doesn't know what rape and incest is. I think it's appalling that you can treat a person, who is expressing their creativity, like that. Not everyone has the same concept of what good writing is, and I for one think that this is a good story, showing raw emotions. Sorry if I seem to be railing on all of you, but really, she's already asked that people don't flame...just think of her feelings before you put her down.
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From ANON - Brazgirl on August 17, 2003
Hei! Don't give up writting! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! Your fic is good, forget about those flames. Yes, sometimes people bring us down but you have to get over it! People who can't read a warning, please... don't desirve to be listened. Hope you update soon!
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From ANON - lena on August 17, 2003
good storing...funkinmg flamers can fuck of read the god damn warning's people the aurthor put them there for a reason!
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From amandalee on August 16, 2003
Oh dear, I really didn't want you to think of my comment as a flame. I'm totally against flaming, becaus's 's one of the meanest things you can do to an author. I wanted to give you constructive criticism, but I'm sorry if my words offended you. It wasn't my intention.

First of all - I did read the warnings, and the content in your story don't quick me, but let me tell you what I think.

My opinion is still the same, though. The characters in your story don't seem much like Tolkien's characters. I know, there are plenty of stories out there where poor Legolas geapedaped by Aragorn, Boromir or whoever. I can a still accept it if it's AU as you say, but even in an AU story the characters should act like they normally do, just in a different kind of setting. Why did you make Thranduil a rapist? If you wanted to write a LoTR rape fic, why didn't you choose someone who is evil in canon, like Grima or Saruman? (OK, I know mosty people prefer to write about pretty elves instead of the ugly, slimy bad guys, but still.)

But I hope you realize that it would take a really sick man, even in today's modern society, to do something like that to his own child (or anyone, for that matter.) Then would Tolkien's elves? I think not.

Your story has some serious flaws, but I think you have the potential to write a really good story. I like your writing style and you're good at grammar and spelling.

I agree with some of the previous reviewers, but no one has the right to flame you and call your work "a worthless piece of shit" like FicLover did. That's being plain mean, and I definitely don't support that. But I also think that you shouldn't regard contructive criticism as flames, because we don't review to be mean - we want to give you advice how to improve your writing.

You have the right to write whatever you want, I know that, and if you're happy with your story I think you should write it as you wish. Your own opinion is the most important, after all. I'm a writer myself, and I know it is difficult to please everybody.

Take care,

Amanda Lee
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From ANON - Elisa on August 16, 2003
I usually don't bother with badfic, but this is just too horrendous. First off, it belongs in the original fiction section, because basically all you have done is written a rape-incest story and inserted Tolkien's names. It is *not* AU - AU changes one or two things with the intent of imagining how an old story might turn out differently. This story has no connection to Tolkien's work. Have you even read the books? First, elves die when they are raped (Morgoth's Ring). Second, they cherished their children - even the most evil elf of all time, Feanor, did not physically abuse his sons (Morgoth's Ring). Third, Thranduil is described as a wise and good king in The Hobbit. Fourth, Legolas is far too well-adjusted to have been the victim of such torture. These are serious subjects, about which you plainly have no understanding or knowledge. The fact that such things obviously turn you on sickens me, and I sincerely hope you grow up quite a bit before you have children.
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From ANON - My-chan on August 15, 2003
this is not a flame, just something that should make you think.

first of all I didn't read the story, just the reviews you got because I was curious what people said.

Now i have to agree with FicLover. Elves would never rape their own children, nor any other of their own kind. Tolkien wanted the elves to be an ideal race without something like agressions against each other. Although he wrote quite a few notes about elves, one of them was that an wil will surely die from the pain and humiliation of rape. of course we can bend what tolkien said, but I don't think we should ignore something like that. would thranduil really want to kill his own child, or would he even want to hurt him?

I can't get myself to believe something like that. Personally I don't think that he would even hit Legolas, or his other children.

Of course you can write whatever you want, and again I point out that this comment is not meant harmfully. I just think you shouldn't have acted so thoughtlessly when you came up with the idea for the story, and in honor for tolkiens work you really should have spent more thoughts on it. then again if you really wanted to write something like that, it should at least have a very well thoughtout plot, and from some of the reviews I can assume that it doesn't.

so please next time when you decide to write something as weighty and serious as childabuse and rape-incest choose the fandome more whisely.

thanks for your time.
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From ANON - Deva Dance on August 14, 2003
Arrrgh!! You can't leave stories as cliff hangers!!! ple please, continue. Love ya, ~Deva D.
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From ANON - me on August 14, 2003
oh Cassie, you know i'm just a Thranduil rabid fan :D
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From ANON - Whatever on August 14, 2003
De ja vu time. Don't listen to flamers, I don't know how they have the balls to even do it, I gave constructive criticism once and I felt terrible about it. I love this fic, I don't know, if a fic isn't all angsty and stuff then it seems boring to me.
Now it is a terrible thing to be raped and it must be terrible for a victim but I belive that it's not entirely impossible to write about it, people act it in films.
And what I'm about to say is not in any way me ing ing my own trumpet but I have been having councelling for a while now for my borderline personlity disorder and my councellor is absolutely convinced I have been abused in some way because of the things I write, yet I haven't, not at all. I just seem to have an understanding of terror, self hatred, blame, guilt, loathing and that crap and it shows in my fics, and they should know, they're the experts, now maybe that makes me a freak but that's just me.
Okay basically, keep writing cos I want to read more, only wish I had the guts to damand reviews ;-P
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