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By : Orlisgirl
  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2003
    Good fic! Please, go on!!! I liked the last chapter... very dark! But.. poor Leggy!
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  • From ANON - Risika on August 11, 2003
    I re-read the whole thing and its sooo good! Hurry and put ch.4 up! I'm very impatient can't you tell.
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  • From ANON - ??????? on August 11, 2003
    I read this from ff.net
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  • From ANON - Risika on August 10, 2003
    This is sooo good! Legolas's brothers should pay dearly. Make them suffer!! MUHAHAHA! Whats up with his father hugging him? And remember don't pay any attention to flamers. This is a good story so far and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - me on August 10, 2003

    This doesn’t sound like Legolas, or the Legolas we know as the elf who-lifts-my-eyebrow (heh heh, sorry, personal joke) he sounds a bit I dunno… too soap operaish dramatic to be the “let’s go find the sun” or “see how many Orcs I can kill with my super doper bow and **one** knife!” elf we know from Tolkien; so we get one OOC (NOT talking about Thrandy yet) either way, he doesn’t strike me as the kind of dude who grew up being raped and abused and Valar knows what else… and *please* take your time to ponder and wonder, rape isn’t something to be taken lightly, and elves are pretty darn sensitive about anything concerning sex. And yes, the common belief is that they die from being rape, and if Legolas’s life was hell as you describe it, his fae would have left for the halls all ready.

    And you know, elves have a different approach on death then man… so it’s a bit.. extreme, IMO, that their reaction would be so harsh… and dumb, if I may say so, to hate the kid, if Thrandy is the one who after all had to support his wife and son’s fae during the pregnancy and all… (elf thing.. hard for me to explain, I’ve read the books in my native language which is not English so forgive me if it sounds a bit off)

    Oy, why did you have to make Thrandy such a bastard? I dig the dude, he’s cool. he abandoned the pomp of Noldor-influenced Beleriand to live the simple elvish lifestyle of his Silvan people, he defends his kingdom without nooooo stinkin’ ring, he’s bl– al– always a plus, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand he’s secured enough in his masculinity (elf – masculinity?) to wear flowers on his head! Isn’t it awesome!? Ack, I love the dude, to tell you the truth… and I have no problem with what other people likes to read, but.. I think everyone would be more happy if you’ve made this story a little more…realistic, be more creative, make them act more elvish-like(speech and behavior is a bit off, IMO) and more plot! when was Legolas born? Are you going with the silly num number? Who was his mother? Sivan? Sindarin? Mary-Sue™? Don’t his brothers have anything better to do in their lives? Where are all the lovely wood elves? How come they name Thranduil their “greatest king”? stone walls echo around you know (scream inside a cave, it’s fun as hell) is Greenwood still Greenwood? The whole plot revolving around the rape abu abuse would is er-…

    Please, rethink your approach on the rape issue, and the Thranduil i, an, and the OOC issue, and the-elves-who-hurts-their-kids-hey-that’s-AU! Issue .I think it would do you good if you’d read this: http://www.ansereg.com/what_tolkien_officially_said_abo.htm (what Tolkien said about sex) aaaaaaaand the “laws and customs” on the same site, y’know, learn a bit about them elves and their home life..and all.

    This isn’t a flame, by the way, just my opinion. I actually believe people can write whatever they want, these are just my advices, you tak take them to heart or you can ask aff.net to bloke me from the review boards – I honestly don’t care.

    Cha cha cha!


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  • From ANON - Deva Dance on August 10, 2003
    Don't pay any attention to the flamers, love. Don't quit on the story. I know if you keep going, t'will turn into a real diamond, savvy?
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  • From ANON - Orli\'s Lover on August 10, 2003
    Hey-this is Orli's Lover (formerly known as Elf Girl Tati), I just read the chapter and I thought it was bloody brilliant (no pun intended). I hope you write more soon! I'll be waiting for it....and the chapter was good-not kidding. Nice job at your first shot at rape-made me feel REALLY bad for Legolas!!!! I can't believe he has to sleep of the floor after he got beaten AND raped like 3 times!!! Wow-such cruelty....Well-good job, keep it up!
    Cheers!
    Orli's Lover
    PS: My pen name isn't meant to be copying yours-I have this pen name on another site and I hadn't registered here yet when I reviewed the first time, so I made up something and put it down. :)
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  • From ANON - Christina on August 09, 2003
    Excellent. Keep writing this one. ;)
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  • From ANON - Amanda Lee on August 09, 2003
    I really think Thranduil is OOC. What kind of Elf would do that to his child? Is there any reason for him to be evil, other than the grief after his wife's death? I mean, has the grief made him mad, or something? I think you should work some more with your plot. If you're going to write over 30 chapters, I think this needs something more than Legolas being raped and abused to stay interesting.

    Also, let me give you a piece of advice - don't put author's notes in the middle of the story. It's actually quite annoying, and disrupts the flow of your story.

    I also don't think it'sy smy smart of you to demand at least five reviews before posting the next chapter. I understand if you want feedback (hey, who doesn't want that?) but I wouldn't make it a condition to keep writing. You write fot your own sake, don't you, not to please others.

    Take no offense, but this is my opinion,

    regards,

    ~ Amanda Lee
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 09, 2003
    dude...

    all that for sneezing? or was it for the spying? whichever.. a tad extreme.. and painful sounding..

    will we find out who Thranduil and them was yelling at?

    for the technical stuff, I noticed a few bits that didn't make a lot of sense, the part right before he was talking about something used on snakes. did didn't quite understand that...

    but otherwise, I didn't see any major issues, good job :)

    update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Deva on August 09, 2003
    Oooooh!!! Wonderful! I absolutly love it!!! Please don't stop with this story!!
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  • From ANON - Risika on August 09, 2003
    Its good. Can't wait for next chapter. Are you going to make Legolas father and brothers sorry for what they did to him?
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  • From ANON - ??? on August 08, 2003
    I just wanted to let you know that you're very cool for not giving up on this fic. I hope you don't pay attention to any flamers you get because they forget that it's just FICTION!!! You should really keep gong regardless of them.
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  • From ANON - FicLover on August 08, 2003
    ;-) You have an interesting nerve, demanding reviews before updating such ein poorly written, poorly researched piece of Scheisse. Have you ever experienced the being raped before? I have, and it is nothing of which to make light. Fanfiction.net knew what it was doinen ien it took this down, it is a waste of bandwidth. Elves do not rape, especially their own, because a raped Elf DIES. End of story. Please turn your writing to something much more worth one's time.
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  • From ANON - Elf Girl Tati on August 08, 2003
    Hey-I thought that this chapter was a great start to something that could be really great-I'm dying for you to update, so do it soon!!!!! And please try to
    makethe chapters jsut a bit longer.....
    Cheers!
    Elf Girl
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