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Reviews for First Born

By : linweseregon
  • From ANON - Mirasaui on November 03, 2003
    After I read your update on "Ambush", I tried to read the last chapter here, but AFF kept timing out. Finally, I was able to catch the end of the story!

    This was very sweet, and yes, I like Thranduil much better as a loving and caring Father. Too often he is portrayed as evil and cruel, and Legolas as meek and innocent. That Legolas becomes the strong and heroic Elf of the fellowship belies such a parent. In essence, I truly enjoyed this story. It was well-written and a pleasure to read.
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  • From ANON - giggle on November 03, 2003
    Just got to read this all the way through and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I do hope there are more tales of Legolas growing up in this particular family. I too enjoy L having a nice normal life occasionally. I like angst and drama also but if the nice and normal is well written it can be a joy.
    I am now going to read the story about Elrond being kidnapped. I look forward to more stories from you. Thank you. giggle
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on November 02, 2003
    Thanks for sharing this beautiful story, it was really great and I am sorry it is over. The way you portraited Thranduil as a good father is great. I hope you write more stories about Legolas' family. I'll be back to read them! :-D
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  • From ANON - Lidra on October 23, 2003
    Pretty damn good. There are a few minor errors here and there, but nothing too serious. E-mail is above.
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  • From ANON - Mirasaui on October 15, 2003
    This was a sweet chapter. Your description of the birthing room was wonderful. Would have loved a room like that when I had my child! Anxious to see the rest of the story.

    Mirasaui
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on October 15, 2003
    That was beautiful... really sensitive. Please, write more, your story is so nice!!!
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  • From ANON - Breach Cannon all must die! on October 09, 2003
    This is the best LOTR fic on this whole site
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on October 08, 2003
    That was a cruel cliff! I am curious to see Thranduil's reaction to his new baby!!! Update soon =)
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  • From ANON - Mirasaui on October 08, 2003
    Lovely story. I like how you portray Thranduil as a caring and loving husband. His and Athiel's love is tender and touching. Look forward to more. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Leo\'sGirl on September 28, 2003
    WOW! THIS IS GOOD! I DON'T MIND IF THE DATES DON'T ADD UP. I WAS A BIT CONFUSED AT FIRST, BUT, HEY WHO ISN'T. I'M NOT A BIG LORD OF THE RINGS FAN. BUT I DO KNOW MY FAV. ELF. ( SEE NAME ) WELL. CONTUINE PLEAZ.
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on September 27, 2003
    So cute this chapter... Please, keep writting! :-D
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on September 20, 2003
    Please, keep writing! Very interesting the teasing thing...
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on September 02, 2003
    Keep writting, this looks promising. I liked the last chapter. V. sad but beautiful
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on August 10, 2003
    That was so very sad.Think I'm going to cry.Poor Thranduil and his wife.Hoping to read more.
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  • From ANON - imladrys on August 10, 2003
    wow, that was so heart breaking. Now I'm officially hooked to this fic. Thranduil was so full of emotion and sorrow, it was refreshing to read a fic that doesn't make Thranduil cold and unfeeling.
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