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Reviews for Cuil Eden

By : Esteliel
  • From prastine on March 18, 2005
    I love this chapter. I feared Legolas' brother would ruin the complacency that Legolas had seemed to finally find the night before by making him remember the rape but it seemed to end well. Will be watching...
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  • From ANON - FF on March 17, 2005
    it's very ,strong with feelings, you are a very good writter.

    Keep going

    FF
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  • From ANON - Amanda on March 10, 2005
    It has been a long time since I reviewed one of your stories but I've been keeping up on this one all the same. I've been waiting for this confrontation since you first wrote about their intention to leave Imaldris. It was short but not disappointing. I was also kind of happy (in a odd sort of way) to hear Legolas call what happened to him "rape." That was exactly what it was.

    It seemed like Legolas was trying to avoid the truth about what it had actually been and now is sort of coming to terms with it. I wonder though if Glorifindel has come to that conclusion too. Is he avoiding the actual events of the situation by telling himself that Legolas had been asking for it or dose he actually believe that their first time was entirely unforced?
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  • From ANON - nightbreeze on March 09, 2005
    you really need to watch the typoes, there are lots of them
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  • From ANON - Nighbreeze on March 09, 2005
    What Glofindel did not understand is Legolas needed comfort that he could not give him. Legolas needed the comfort of a parent figure not a lover
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  • From ANON - pris on March 09, 2005
    i always get soexcited to readone of your chapter, this has long been a favoriteof mine. please write more and soon.
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  • From ANON - Aelin-uial on March 09, 2005
    That was satisfying. This chapter contained so many things I've been waiting for - for Legolas to meet up with his brother, for the inevitable confrontation and for Legolas to finally tell his family exactly what happened to him. I loved Glorfindel making the wreath of flowers for Legolas's hair, a reminder of the way Legolas looked the first time Glorfindel saw him. That imagery moved so naturally into Galuron's appearance and then Legolas recounting the rape and finally expressing his outrage. Very well done. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Are Glorfindel and Legolas going to have a long-overdue discussion about the rape? How much does Glorfindel know about Thranduil's treatment of Legolas? Will we find out why Thranduil treated Legolas that way? I have my own theories of course, as I'm sure everyone does. But only you can answer our questions! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Faramirinnainen on March 08, 2005
    An absolutely beautiful chapter where Legolas stood up for himself with a quiet dignity that shows how much he has matured. I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - InLuvWithSlash on March 08, 2005
    You kow what...Legolas needs some tenderness now. And he needs Glorfindel to finally see how hards it is for Leggy. And while I'm at it, Glorfindel should stop being an ass and act like a damned adult. *And* he should finally treat Leggy better. ***And*** he should let Leggy now hom much he care ! There ! Poor Leggy...Poor, poor, poor Leggy.
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  • From ANON - FF on February 10, 2005
    this chapter is exelent, keep written you are very good

    tu historia es magistral ,y llevo ya mucho tiempo detras de eela la cual es extraordinaria y muy emotiva te felicito
    grasias por tu atencios
    saludos FF
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  • From DurOltha on February 06, 2005
    I love the way you write. Keep the chapters coming...because I can't wait for more! ~DarkDreamer
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  • From ANON - atanpalpa on February 05, 2005
    I adore this story.. And I love where you are going with this. I remain a devoted fan.
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  • From ANON - uppacrick on February 04, 2005
    Hi. I love this story. I consider it my guiltiest pleasure. There's been lots of things that have happened along the way (including Anestel) that I've had to think about and reconsider, trying to see where the story is going and always, always, I've come to see your brilliance. But I want to make to a couple of observations about chapter 28.
    When Celeborn is talking to Legolas, he's got the right message in that Legolas shouldn't be ashamed at how his body reacts to Glorfindel's particular brand of affection and he's also right when he tells Legolas to take pride in his role as lover and parent. After all you've already alluded that for Legolas to be ashamed of himself all through out his long life with as Glorfindel's sex slave would eventully destroy his spirit, and that having a parent damaged like that would ultimately hurt Gilrion.
    But Celeborn is way off base, I think, when he puts Legolas' situation into the same context as that of the great warriors of old. Yes, it makes sense that these great elves needed to give control over to someone else occasionally and D/s sex might do that for them, but Legolas is not an elf with great resonsibilites beyond caring for his son and giving his body to Glorfindel whenever it is demanded. He's no ruler or great warrior -- and I don't mean to trivialize what this character's gone through, but that just doesn't wash for me.
    Also the part about keeping these types of activities in the privacy of one's bedroom is not a luxury afforded Legolas. Everyone in Imladris (and many in Mirkwood and Lorien) knows what goes on behind their closed doors or on the balcony or in the garden. Legolas' must struggle for every shred of dignity he holds. Even though Elrond and Glorfindel have tried to keep the whispers and gossip to a minimum in recent chapters, only Legolas being allowed to become something other than Glory's toy will ever earn him the smallest hint of the type of esteem shown those great elves of Celeborn's stories.
    As I waited for this chapter to be posted, I tried to imagine where you would go with this. I pictured Legolas being made to masterbate on display for Celeborn and Glorfindel. It was *hot*, but I like the direction you are taking it by setting Leggy further on the road to the self esteem he will need to survive -- even if I think Celeborn was off base. Then again, I've only been mulling this over for a couple of days not the usual couple of weeks, so I'm probably wrong. After all nothing Legolas gets in this story is ever purely sweet, there's always a tinge of bitterness for him as well. Again - a mark of your genius. Thanks for listening.
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  • From ANON - noizy on February 01, 2005
    FINALLY!!!!!! You just saved my day! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

    Gosh, I still love this story. And I really wonder what´s going on in Legolas´ mind right now. hehe ... keep on writing please! : )
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  • From ANON - Soda on January 28, 2005
    Hey Esteliel. I just wanted to say that I really am amazed by your writing. Especially the "Anestel" story. I was never a big fan of slash until I read "Anestel".
    And I really hope you'll keep on working with "Cuil Eden". I'm looking forward to a new chapter! Great job! Regards/ Soda
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