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Reviews for Barriers both Noble and Arduous

By : Rufferto
  • From ANON - kiki on August 24, 2003
    Great fic.Please more.LOL
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  • From ANON - Twilight on August 23, 2003
    Your little story glimpses inrestrestor's past are *so* tantalizing and frustrating. Want to knore ore about the painful and shameful event in his past.

    Interesting to have all of the elves meet up at the battle scene. Lots of tension and secret desires abounding here. Look forward to reading about all of the complications in the different relationships with being played out here.
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on August 23, 2003
    More please!!!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 23, 2003
    YAY! you updated! :D

    I'm just a bit confused though.. Elrond doesn't like both of who leaving Rivendell at the same time? The Twins, or Glorfindel and Erestor? I think you meant the twins, but I'm not quite sure.

    and near the end, after the flashback, I think you got Elrohir and Erestor confused.

    other then that, it was good!

    Glorfy is alive! and the twins and Haldir and possibly Rumil are in a weird love triangle... er... square... thing.. (ope they get that figured out!)

    poor Erestor... I want to give him a hug. :(

    Update soon please!


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  • From ANON - Aduial on August 23, 2003
    Will you please write more?!? Must read more!

    ~Aduial
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  • From ANON - alexcat on August 22, 2003
    You've still got me on pins and needles! Chapter five was another cliffie! Great work!


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  • From ANON - kira on August 22, 2003
    hi,

    Wow :) I love the story, and your style is very enjoyable.. I need more of this! Erestor and Elrohir left Imladris without proper equipment?
    I don't understand Erestor's past yet.. :( He did what to save who and when? And he tried to kill himself or he was tortured? :((( I hope he will be allright, and Glorfindel will survive this. And what about Elladan's wound? I need more! Please update.

    bye,
    -K-

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  • From ANON - Iamme on August 22, 2003
    NOOOOO YOU CAN'T STOP THERE I NEED MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on August 21, 2003
    It is puzzling why the orcs keep pursuing them for so many days. Elladan etc have to stop and make a stand now. So nervous for them. Hope Elladan's plan works or reinforcements come in time. So glad that you update regularly.
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  • From ANON - alexcat on August 21, 2003
    This is a lovely fiction and I surely hope to read more soon... so much suspense, so many secrets.
    I love your characterization of Erestor, Glorfindel and the lovely twins.

    Keep up the good work.

    alex
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  • From ANON - Twilight on August 20, 2003
    Glad Galadriel sent Haldir and Rumil to meet the Rivendell party. Bes bes being injured, Elladan, Glorfindel and others must be exhausted from being chased so long by the persistent orc party.

    Hope Erestor and Elrohir won't run into trouble when they try to find out what happen to E and G.
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on August 20, 2003
    I didn't know that Glorfindel was already in love with Erestor the first time he saw him.So that's why he dared to kiss him in the Halls of Fire.Too bad that Erestor seems indifferent to it.I hope he realizes tha als also feels the same way towards Glorfindel before it's too late.
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  • From ANON - Pookie on August 20, 2003
    gah...

    want more.. need more...

    ok, real review (I hope)

    nicely done!
    although not knowing what Erestor is freaking out about is driving me bonkers! So you better hurry up and add that bit of the story!!

    I can't wait til they all discover that Erestor is not the ice-Elf they all think he is, I hope Glorfy doesn't give up on him...

    so... Rumil has issues with Elladan? I wonder why...

    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - LK on August 20, 2003
    I am enjoying this immensely. What angst though! I feel for each and every one of them.

    I can't wait for more. I also am looking forward to answers . . . *hint, hint*

    LK
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  • From ANON - Aduial on August 20, 2003
    I really like how this story is shaping up; please continue to update frequently and you will make me very happy.

    A few things I noticed. You sometimes say 'Elrohir' when you mean 'Elladan'; be careful when you revise to catch these mistakes. There are also a few grammatical mistakes, not many bome ome people might nitpick on them; I personally don't mind since I know what you are trying to say. Also, Haldir is a 'March' Warden, not a 'Watch' Warden although he does a lot of watching.

    If you don't have one, I advise you to find a beta as I have found they are often helpful in catching mistakes I miss on my work. I offer my services to you if you need one.

    Other than that, please keep it up. This is really becoming a wonderful story to read.

    ~Aduial
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