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Reviews for The Difference between Love and Marriage

By : Kaiyoz
  • From ANON - Lena on December 02, 2003
    its a good story dont stop writing!!!! i love it!!!! write more please?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Confuzzzed on December 02, 2003
    I am very much a FF.N reader for the most part... but your story and two HP stories are why i keep coming back to this site.

    You write very well and the lack of massive spelling/grammer errors in a ic iic is quite refreshing. The 'maternal elf' idea if rather interesting... as is the interaction between Haldir and (the extreemly innocent) Legolas. I do hope you plan to keep going on this story, as it is quite good. I can't wait to see how Legolas and Haldir discover the pregnancy and how they deal with the newborn in the first few weeks.

    Is Berlain gone for good? or Is he going to come back and cause some more trouble?

    -Confuzzed-

    PS-is Orophin going to get a wife at some point? I think he deserves one, after spending so much time with Legolas.... Would he want to go back to the bachlor lifestyle... having to cook and clean for himself?
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  • From ANON - yan on December 02, 2003
    thanks God, Finally next chapter is up! I thought you're gone only God know where. Nice chapter and nice sex...uhmmm yummy! Plese make Legolas pregnant soon and DO NOT forget moodswing! I can't hardly wait.
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  • From ANON - jz on December 02, 2003
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue. This is a great story with excellant character? relationship development done concisely. Many fanfic authots tend to run on like a novel unescessarily( this is after all not supposed to be faulkner), but your movement is excellant and the developing dynamics between characters is both natural and realistic. I know it can be hard when you want to move on but please at least trygivegive them a baby before you write off. Thanks for listening and writing,

    JZ
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  • From ANON - HHS on December 02, 2003
    So,when Legolas gets pregnant,will you give him 1 or 2?Just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Aly on December 02, 2003
    Yes you have to continue with the story! Atleast until Legolas and Haldir have their baby! I was happy to see Haldir tell Legolas that he loves him, and now I believe we're just waiting for Legolas to feel the same! You have to keep writing this story!
    Suggestion wise, I'd keep with the 12 month normal elf pregnancy. Other then that, it's all fun. :)
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  • From ANON - Starwind on December 01, 2003
    Hey I'd love to read more of this story. Anything u write i'd read.
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  • From ANON - Becky Rymer on December 01, 2003
    Luv the story. Do not change a thing and keep up the good work. This is one of my favorite stories so if you stop writing it, I'm afraid I'm going to have to hurt you.
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  • From ANON - hikari on December 01, 2003
    noooo please noo ... don't stop writing this story . i wait every single day for a new chapter .. i like the whole Maternal elf thingy .... it 's one of the best stories ie eve ever read so ... please don't stop writing it ....
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  • From ANON - Rae on December 01, 2003
    Legolas needs to feed the baby the pregnancy should be I dont know 9 months and Haldir needs be with him the whole time.
    Rae
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  • From ANON - willow on December 01, 2003
    I just love this story. In fact, only yesterday I was thinking about how it had been awhile since you updated. I can only speak for myself, but I look forward to reading more. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Rae on December 01, 2003
    No I loves this story I check on the site everyday to see if it has been updated It is one of my favorites. The strong Haldir suits Legolas so. I have been waiting for what seems like for ever to read Haldir reaction to Legolas getting pregnate and now it seems so close... Nooooooo ::sob:: dont leave me like other writers do...
    Rae
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  • From ANON - Polite on December 01, 2003
    Dear Kaiyoz
    Okay. I really like this story. I check it everyday to see if there is an update. Okay, I understand how confusing male prenancies are. There are a few ways to do it. You could make him breast feed, flat chested and magic milk but the more logical way to do it would be that the elves can grow a type of plant that grows milk that can nurish a baby. Haldir should know before Legolas...that would be cute. I can picture it now. Lego "And when did you plan on telling me! When the baby was coming out?!" Haldir trying not to laugh "I kind of thought you noticed...Honey sit down its not good for the baby." Lego gives Hal evil glare. LOL that would be cute...of course you could do it better...He should be pregnant for about three chapters. Chapter one in the beginning first 6 months. And Chapter 2 the last 3 months. Start to give birth is the end of the 2nd chapter and the third chapter his birth and after affects. Haldir in the birth process, worrying but supportive. Typical male. Tears for tears. Whatever you decide to do will work perfectly. Good luck in future chapters and endeav Pol
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  • From ANON - Inwitari on December 01, 2003
    This is great! I love how you are taking this story... great job! I love it and I cant wait for more...
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  • From ANON - kathy stgqvk on December 01, 2003
    Hola:
    Didn't I tell you that I love this fic? Well, I do. I hope you continue it.
    Kisses, kathy
    Chao
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