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Reviews for The Difference between Love and Marriage

By : Kaiyoz
  • From ANON - white lily on April 26, 2004
    Hi, there,

    Another wonderful chapter! I really love your style and I have to say I almost gave up the hope of reading a new chapter before your graduation, thank you for the treat! Hope everything goes well in school especially with you English teacher, it surprises me that someone so young can write so well. No matter what problem your teacher has with you, it shouldn't be because you are a bad writer or anything, it might very well be the very opposite.
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  • From ANON - mz psycho on April 26, 2004
    great chapters as usual! nd about your english teacher, don't worry about it. just do your best and it'll be fine. it will all be over soon anyway cuz ur going to graduate!! *cheers* i have this math teacher who hates me for no reason too. no matter how many 100's i get on every test nd project, she still hates me. its all cuz she told out whole class that she cant write for her life nd almost failed her english class once. so shes jealous of me cus she knows that i'm good in math AND english(i caught her looking over my report card in homeroom once). so that fact is that ur english teacher is such a bitch is prolly cuz she's jealous she can't be twice as good a writer as you in her whole entire life. :D
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  • From ANON - Vanilla on April 25, 2004
    Awesome chapter. I love when Legolas is moody at least Haldir stayed with him and didn't leave. I can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - becca on April 23, 2004
    No slumping!! Please!!! I LOVE this story! It's one of the one's that I look for every time I hit this page. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing!!! Your writing rocks. This story is awesome and I'm really enjoying the relationship ups and downs, and Haldir's learning curve. If you need inspiration, ideas, a muse, I've left my e-mail address. I'd be happy to give more encouragement anytime you think you're losing motivation.
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  • From ANON - Squall on April 23, 2004
    Again, good as always. Thanks for the great chapter.
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  • From ANON - giggle on April 23, 2004
    Well a real fight that didn't have a happy ending. Those two are growing into their relationship.
    You really have a good handle on how newly wed and pregnant wives can feel. I had waited so long for a baby that I reveled in every moment but when you have so many changes to deal with in just a short time it is really rough.
    I am glad that Haldir "got it". No not that, but how much he needs to put Legolas and his new family first. Playtimes are going to be few and far between as long as they have a family together.
    I liked the ending. They need a serious make up time now and I hope they get it.
    I know it must be hard for you trying to update while you are working so hard to get school behind you. Just know that we are waiting for you and will give you all the time you need. Real Life can really stress you out to the max. Good Luck and nice to hear from you again. giggle
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  • From on April 22, 2004
    Yea!!! I'm so glad you updated. I've missed this story. However, please focus on your school work. I'd hate for you to get in trouble. Wonderful job on the story. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on April 22, 2004
    really good
    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Mimi on April 21, 2004
    Hi there,
    I started to read your story yesterday finifinished it today. I really like it alot. It is really nice to see a more vulnerable Legolas, you just want to cuddle him and make him feel better. I like how you write and the way you describe Haldir and all the others. Haldir is so complex, loving husband and jealous madelf. And what a temper...You're really talented, the way you describe the feelings, emotions, thoughts, inner fights and mood swings is great. You've got me addicted and I can't wait to read more. I wish you all the best!!
    Love,
    Mimi
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  • From ANON - Giggles on April 19, 2004
    I am so loving this story!! I love Legoles and Haldir together! They are my favorite pair. Please update soon!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - dinah47 on April 07, 2004
    Love this. Just a hint from a former teacher. Write the way your teachers want you to write in school. Write what makes you happy here and if you plan on going to college, take some Creative Writing courses. In those you write in your own style, but are also helped with character development, primary and secondary characters, setting scenes and painting with words. Seeing that you are already doing that, it should be a lot of fun for you. I took the courses and found that I cannot write (not enough imagination) but sure can teach it, which I did for 5 years. Enjoyed it and still have 2 students who are now successful authors who send their work to me to pre-proof or beta before sending to the publisher.

    I hope that you will be able to update this at least once before the 25th of May (yes, I always read Author's Notes). Give Yancie a hug and pat for me. Don't know what breed she is but I'm glad she is your muse. By the way, in the story is Yancie a Grey Wolf or a Timber Wolf? It would help picture her coloring and markings.

    Go girl, your writing is great.
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  • From ANON - Pirate Bitch nut on March 30, 2004
    Right, don't remember if I reviewed this befre, but, ah well. This story is positively captivating. I could almost see the actual images in my mind's eye. I suggest you update soon or I will give you lemons to cure that scurvy. (If you update, you get oranges yummm ^.^) Seriously though, this is a thouroughly intoxicating story, I cannot wait for another chapter. (Cold turkey)
    -Pirate-
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  • From ANON - sweetgirlk on March 19, 2004
    Love the story. Hope you keep writing would love a sequel. Doing the college thing myself and am ready to pull my hair out.


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  • From ANON - ambasder on March 18, 2004
    twin, Rumil baby sitting girl or maternal and orophin baby sitting the boy
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  • From ANON - becca on March 18, 2004
    If you can write a fab fic like this, you can ACE English! Get it done so you can write more of this story. =)
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