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Reviews for The Difference between Love and Marriage

By : Kaiyoz
  • From on February 24, 2004
    Yea!!! An update. I love this story very much, in fact it was one of the first I found on this site. You are doing a marvelous job of writting it. Hmm, should Haldir be in the delivery room or outside of it? There are multiple possiblities for both of those ideas. If Haldir was inside he would be the "target" of Legolas' , lets call it frustration, while inor. or. If Haldir is outside he'll probably pace a hole in the floor. Either way you have great possiblities. Looking forward to more, please update again .
    si.
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  • From ANON - MyGirlCrais on February 24, 2004
    Oh you have to have Haldir in the delivery room! I bet even marchwardens have a hard time staying conscious through that. :-D
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  • From ANON - Squall on February 24, 2004
    Wonderful! Yet again. Good job! Congrats with Graduating!
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on February 23, 2004
    That was fantastic, sorry short very late over here

    take care
    louise
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  • From ANON - giggle on February 23, 2004
    AN - Going to graduate. Congratulations.
    Oh suffer Haldir - you b*st*rd. You started this after all. I am just practicing for Legolas after about six hours into labor he will definitely be screaming this.
    Goody baby things, names, who will the baby look like, be like, girl, boy or maternal male. So many things to think about. That is the fun part.
    Breast Feeding!! The poor naive prince strikes again. I don't blame his guardians for not touching this with a ten foot pole, or the elven Middle Earth equivalent.
    So Haldir comes home after a hard day at the office and gets hit with questions again. This is so true to life.
    Anything else going to happen? Well labor and delivery. At that point keep sharp objects away from the prince. My MIL slapped my FIL so the Dr sent him to the waiting room and then my MIL cried through the whole rest of the delivery. She was so upset with the Dr. Go figure. You are not exactly in your right mind at the time.
    Well at least Legolas hasn't gotten fat yet, or swollen ankles and acne hasn't hit yet.
    I loved ada's gift/care package. Lots of sweet goodies. And the mental image of Legolas in a huge tent like tunic was a scream.
    I thought the idea of sweet gentle love and the two of them sitting together reading the having a baby book was just so sweet. I am going to overdose on the word sweet but this story really is. I can't help it.
    AN If you think watching a labor/delivery is scary, try going through it. Not now mind you. Wait until you have a life you can share first. Anyway you are exhilirated and terrified at the same time. It is quite a rush.
    I know you need to get finals done and do a good job with them so your time isn't exactly your own right now. We look forward to more but you already know that. A prologue sounds intriguing. When would it start and would it be justolasolas' life? Anyway anything you want to do I will be there for. giggle
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  • From ANON - AnaLee on February 20, 2004
    Hey,

    I just read your story and I think it is very interesting. I hope you update soon.

    AnaLee
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  • From on February 19, 2004
    This is wonderfully done. I love how Legolas has now been accepted as warrior by some of the other elves. I also love that he has started to become some what demanding of Haldir. Please keep going, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - HHS on February 18, 2004
    So Leggy is definitely going to have just one child?Okay,a girl pe!!!e!!!
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  • From ANON - Squall on February 18, 2004
    Aw... That was so good. I liked that chapter...
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  • From ANON - Mystic on February 17, 2004
    I really liked this chapter. lol I love when Legolas gets all moody. Good luck on get rid of your writer's block. I know it can be a real pain.

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  • From ANON - Lilibeth on February 17, 2004
    Fine fine fine!!!!! Go on like this......I really love your work!
    Don't give up! There's a lot of people who's waiting Legolas/Haldir's next chapters!!!!!
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  • From ANON - giggle on February 17, 2004
    Oh good Celarion is back and promises he and Mwalin will be around for the birth. Yancie got a mention also. Go Yancie and I hope you are doing better.
    That was a good conversation between Haldir and Celarion. We get to hear how Haldir is holding up in all this and how he views Legolas' behavior and trials over this first pregnancy. He is so sweet when he talks about the prince and their up coming responsibility.
    Oh poor Legolas. It is all getting to be just a bit to much for him. Morning sickness, food cravings, needing to sleep so much. He needs to get home and be coddled like any nana-in-waiting. Hey what are we to call him? Haldir calls him wife now. Will he call him a nana or ada? It might be a little weird to call him nana but how about having two adas? That might be a little too confusing when the baby is calling one of them. Oh well whatever you decide we can roll with.
    I thought Legolas on Haldir's horse alone for a little while was cute. Feeling powerful and looked up to on such a big horse. He's so cute it is almost illegal.
    Enough excitement for the rest of his life. Maybe that's why Celeborn sent him on this mission. So he could have a better idea of what warriors like Haldir have to go through. He might have a lot more empathy for Haldir and not have fantasies of being a warrior along side his husband.
    Ada will be thrilled to get his little Leaf's letter and hear that his elfling is not just with child but haring around the woods of Lothlorien killing orcs. NOT.
    I liked his spiel about getting the basics done before fun. He is growing up isn't he?
    Well you certainly don't write as if you have writer's block. That was a lovely chapter. We don't see the blood, sweat and tears you put into the work just the final product so we think this is just tripping off your Word Processor for our entertainment. It is only right that you remind us every once in awhile.
    Take care and I hope your muse gets better and things get easier as spring slowly rises like sap in a tre us us all. giggle
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  • From ANON - ricco12.5 on February 13, 2004
    Keep writing I want to read the rest of the story. Your doing a great job!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 13, 2004
    great story! btw haldir is just known as haldir o lorien which means haldir of lorien. nd tho many people think that greenleaf is legolas's last name, its just an english translation. nd many people also think that thranduillion is is last name but it really is just his title. it means son of thranduil, ion meaning son. so literally legolas thranduillion means legolas son of thranduil. yea sry for rambling... buh hey now hopefully i told u something new
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  • From ANON - mz psycho on February 13, 2004
    another good chapter as always! i dont really notice that u've got writters block, it still flows real good. ne wais keep the good work up! nd many nekkid Legolas's for u 2!
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