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By : loveforelves
  • From ANON - Marie on October 18, 2005
    Not bad, I only read the first chapter and I'm sure it will be better once its betaed as the English is very stilted.
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 07, 2005
    Sorry but this story is difficult to read, full of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Maybe it needs to be checked over before posting???
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on February 13, 2004
    i didnt put this up thinking that ppl wouldnt go complaining, its one of my first stories & it has been beta-d i know now she didnt do a good job, but im not planning to make it better, the story got updated by a mistake, my apologies, but please stop this, i know its bad, just read Forever and always & narcissist, those are my newest
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  • From ANON - luna on February 12, 2004
    Ehm. You know how some authors put a "don't like, don't read" into their summaries? You probably won't like this review.

    You have been warned.

    First of: the sentences are by far too long. If you use that to represent speech, or high emotions, o.k., but doing it constantly makes the whole story appear like a hasty listing of events. So please: shorten down your sentences.

    A lot worse: The story makes very little sense. The characters are OC, and their's no earthly reason for their actions - Thranduil's wife dies, so he decides to sell off his son? Feels awfully like "I just like that situation and couldn't be bothered to make up a good reason". As, for example, Thranduil being influenced by some evil. Saruman, Sauron, somebody.

    To prestall the "I can write what I like": Yes, you can. To save yourself from reviews like this: put up a OOC warning, and in an ideal world, a note that the plot doesn't always make sense.

    Or make up characters which resemble the elves and write an original fiction - I don't see the point in using characters and places Tolkien spend decades to make up, if hardly a single characteristic is the way Tolkien described it.

    I left my e-mail adress, so you can rant at me if it makes you feel better.
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  • From ANON - nutty on February 12, 2004
    WoW
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  • From ANON - stargazer on February 12, 2004
    I realize now, after going through previous reviews, that you have had many people saying the same things that I have[in my earlier review], and that my review, in itself, was rather superfluous. I do appologize for esizisizing a point that has obviously been made to you several times. Finally, i would like to offer to bata your stories, if you haven't yet found someone else to do it. If you do, in fact, want my help, you can e-mail me.
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  • From ANON - stargazer on February 12, 2004
    very good storyline, however (and I don't mean this to be a flame), the bad grammer and writing made this incredibly difficult to read . Because of this difficulty in reading, I lost interest several times, and in many places, I was extremely confused at what was going on. I really don't mean this to be a flame, however, I would seriously suggest a bata reader. I am sorry if ths ofs offensive, but if you put the effort into having this bataed, and then rewrite it, I think that the time and effort will be worth it.
    ~Stargazer
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  • From sivan325 on October 12, 2003
    So sweet.

    Why? Why it's over?

    It was so good story.

    You did it well.

    I loved what I read.
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on October 11, 2003
    hi...well...i will once i finished ''Learning love & desire''
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on October 11, 2003
    SWEET!!!They're married!Absolutely,you must write a sequel!Please?
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  • From sivan325 on October 10, 2003
    When do we read the next chapter, if there is more?

    I don't see 'The End' I just want to read the next chapter. I'm bored.
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on October 08, 2003
    They're getting married!WOOHOO!!!
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  • From loveforelves on October 05, 2003
    *smiles shy*
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  • From sivan325 on October 04, 2003
    That's beautiful.

    Keep writing, I want to read more.

    You did it well.
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on October 04, 2003
    hey & thanks again, im very glad u like it
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