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Reviews for The Crux of the Problem

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - Kirah on December 24, 2006
    Okay, I'm mad at you. You do NOT make a series- a series that I have loved for a very, very long time- and then just CHANGE the pairing! You have been developing the Legolas/Jan pairing since the very beginning of Twisted, and then in 12 little chapters you completely tore it apart. Well written, as always. This is not a flame. I guess. No, I don't want to flame you, because you don't deserve it, and I give you credit for being untraditional. But people who break the mold always get other angry at them, and, unfortunately, I cannot help but be one of the ones who disaproves.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on February 04, 2006
    What a fabulous chapter! She chose Haldir at last. I think I would have made the same choice should I have been so fortunate. What fun have you dreamed up for us now?
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  • From trekqueen on February 03, 2006
    *pokes* well post it already!!! :D

    Poor Legolas, well I guess he should have expected something like this happening when he let his lover have fun in another's bed. Playing with fire and all that. *huggles* great chapter once more and I can't wait to see what is in the next one!

    *goes off in search of Thranduil*
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  • From ANON - serenityblack2000 on February 02, 2006
    OMG! Twin Cliffies! I'm hanging on the edge of my seat, biting my nails and before you know it, I'll be pulling my hair out!! AAAAAAHHHHHHH!

    *Phew* *wipes brow* It's ok, I'm fine now. LOVE IT AS ALWAY

    Trying to wait patiently for the next update......Soon?

    Please! ;)

    SB
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on January 31, 2006
    Loved the updates on this one! Glad to finally have something new to read from you. Please update your Domination one! Its just so WILD! Hope things are going better for you and life is treating you like it finally should.
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  • From trekqueen on January 30, 2006
    *whaps Thandy again* Tehehee! He's all mine!

    Yummy dance moves and good tie in with the music lyrics, as always. :) *sniffles* poor Haldir getting beat up by Celeborn though he did deserve a quick kick in the arse. hahaha! Ooh but I do wonder who we have waiting on the sidelines this time!
    *bounces off to wait for revealing chappie and drags Thandy with her again*
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 30, 2006
    Cliffhangers in a smut story? Interesting development. I spent time wondering what the last cliffie was about but I think I'll let this one go until you tell us. More story please.
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  • From ANON - serenityblack2000 on January 25, 2006
    aaaahhhhhhh! *mouth hanging open* SHANA!! Cliffie!! Evil, Evil thing! I just re-read from the beginning, I just had to. Could not help myself! Ya know I love it! Its wonderful, erotic, exciting and now a Cliffie!! aaaahhhhhh!

    Serious tho, I really enjoy your writing. Janessa has to be one of my alltime favorite charaters. She's kick ass yet...needs a big strong elf in her life. (couldn't we all use one, I could) LOL Oh yea! Anywho, please continue, and soon, I gotta know if my suspisions are true. Its Lego, that yells no, I just know it and what of that vision in the mirror, If she dies (better not or I'm coming to find you). I cant wait to see what happens next! What next, What next, What next???

    Great Job
    Serenityblack2000
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 22, 2006
    Thanks for the evil cliffie! Is Legolas the mystery watcher? Has her time come to make her choice?
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  • From trekqueen on January 14, 2006
    yummy!!! welcome back and such! Can't wait to see what happens after this cliffie with Legolas. I had a feeling he would show sooner or later. Enticing as always m'dear!
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  • From ANON - Zelha on July 14, 2005
    Sure thing, I've been reading ALL your stories in the past week, and I have to say it:
    AMAZING!!!!
    Please, Shana, I don't even know if you keep coming to this site, but I plead you...
    Finish ALL of them!
    I love Haldir, I love Glory... and I really wanna know what's going to happen in this fic and in Twisted...
    And how can I forget the Twins' fic? OMG, that was HOT!!!
    Please, Shanastay... I beg you, say something to this poor elven-lover witch.
    Congratulations for every single one of your stories, you are the Master!
    Regards from Venezuela,
    Zelha
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 02, 2005
    I love, love, love this story. You write so well. This is my favorite pairing so far (not surprising since i lust after Haldir). The smut is juicy and sweet and very addictive. I will wait and look for more on a regular basis. Hope you find time to continue to grace us with your talent.
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  • From ANON - tammatha on January 07, 2005
    I love you writing dearling...I came hunting to find this work ..you are the first fan-fic writer i have ever done that for .
    Bright blessings...OH & I think Haldir should always get the girl..
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  • From ANON - Leany on July 25, 2004
    It was the originality of the disclaimer that made me continue reading. And as I commented to a friend not 10 minutes ago... you know the story's got promise if the disclaimer makes you laugh. Well done
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  • From ANON - Michelleb102 on July 25, 2004
    Bravo! I love Haldir! I'm so glad this isn't a "Mary-Sue" you've done a great job developing Jan, she's a really outstanding character. I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters...I hope I won't have to wait too long. I'll be checking back

    Michelle
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