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Reviews for Invasion of Privacy

By : Nyssa
  • From ANON - Julia on October 24, 2003
    This just keeps getting better and better. I love the way the different characters influence the way the plot runs: Boromir trying to hang on to some pride and control of the situation, similar for Aragorn, who has the advantage of knowing elves and not being so easily overpowered by their charms, and Legolas all to easily ignoring what he does to his short-lived mortal companions - there is a strangly innocent arrogance in the way he tends to think little of what effect his actions might have on the men.

    It's amazing, the stuff you can get away with when you're male and immortal. I have my doubts that either Aragorn nor Boromir would let a mortal woman get away with that

    B

    But at least Aragorn managed to shut up Legolas for a moment, and Boromir could keep some minimum of control... poor things. Alas, what chance have mere mortals of resisting the charms of a first-born devoid of charm.
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  • From ANON - mimine on August 25, 2003
    Your threesome has melted my brain so any attempt at a review will probably not go too well. However, this story is too good to ignore. I can't believe I forgot to check for so long while there were two more chapters out! (and since it was updated in May I dare hope that soon there might be more? I'm one to talk with how I've been treating my Boromir/Aragorn, but still.

    I adore you completely and utterly for this, esp. for the moments of Boromir/Aragorn. I love my two men and even though the elf is irresistible, those two together just do it for me every time. Very well detailed sex scene that mustn't have been easy (having written a threesome I know it's often hard to keep track of who is doing what to whom). I like Boromir in control, it comes as a bit of a surprise considering how he was before (I had imagined a "no surrender" response to the thought of sharing Legolas but I can see that the whole thing intrigued him).

    In short, I love this and I love you.

    Mim
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  • From ANON - Andmetwen on June 29, 2003
    lol, how sad!!! aragorn is left out for like the thousandth time!!! yay!! finally he realizes he's not wanted!! lol, j/k! i love the sweaty sticky ranger!!
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  • From Adinshe on June 01, 2003
    Ow, this is so hot!
    You made my day if not my week.
    More, more!
    I hope Aragorn and Boromir get together.
    They don't need that nasty elf.
    They can comfort each other :P
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  • From ANON - Kira on May 31, 2003
    Hmm...Nice.. Lovely...
    But evil Legolass uses poor Boromir.. :( and Aragorn..

    This is the end? Beautiful friend, the end?
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  • From ANON - Exrated on May 22, 2003
    Awwww.... I feel so bad for Aragorn. Poor guy :( Man, is Leggy ever an ass in your stories!!! ;) I love it, he's usually all tender and submissive, but in your ficcys he's a control freak. I wish for better for Aragorn, butm jum just obsessed over that guy, so I always want him to be happy. Hehehe.

    Love the story, can't -wait- for the next chappy. Plz post soon!

    X
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  • From MerenwenFefalas on May 12, 2003
    Ohhh... about bloody time. :o)

    Cheers!
    Sonja
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  • From ANON - LadyLegoLegolas and Princess of Mirkwood on May 11, 2003
    YUMMY!!!Glad you got to update but we still hope that it will eventually end as B/L pairing.
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  • From ANON - shadow975 on March 05, 2003
    What an interesting series of stories you have here. I'm not altogether comfortable with some of the ... well, let's say semi-consensual stuff that happened in the early parts of the stories (taming the beast, etc), but the stories are hot, that's for sure.

    I have to say, though, it's an alarmingly unflattering picture you're painting of Legolas and Aragorn. Both selfish and more than a little cruel (and not in the fun way), and Legolas quite the manipulative bastard. And Aragorn - geezus, what a king he'll be. Gah. I suppose it's not the most flattering picture of Boromir, that he'd put up with this, but y'know, he's an angel compared to the two little psychopaths he seems to have gotten hooked up with.

    And that line at the end of ch4: "That envious look in his eyes feeds the flames of my desire and as they grow larger and hotter, my compassion for Boromir shrinks and then, when Aragorn lazily moistens his lips with the tip of his tongue, dies away completely." What a prick. Get that Elf within ten feet of me and I'll kill him myself.

    Is there the slightest possiblity that any of these characters are going to come out of this with a shred of honour or dignity?

    I, for one, am desperately hoping for Boromir to turn the tables on them. Heck, maybe even kill 'em both off. Who needs a king who'd act like *this*?


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  • From ANON - The Falcon on February 14, 2003
    Hiya. I've just gotten done reading the other two stories in this trilogy, and now this one. I am not a good enough author to tell you how immensely I've enjoyed myself. You have taken characters that someone else created, and still in keeping with the original characters, somehow managed to make them your own. You are one of those authors that once you start reading, you just can't stop until it's over. Which this one isn't yet, and that my dear is driving me nuts. Not that I'm already not, but you get the picture. I'm going to check back everyday in the hopes that the next chapter will be posted. Uh, just one very, incredibly tiny thing. In I believe the second chapter, when you describe the look in Boromir's eyes when Legolas tells him, he can't love the human, you misspelled disappointment. Like I said a very minor thing. Pat yourself and your beta on your back for me. You deserve it and more. A really breathtaking story!
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on February 03, 2003
    Okay,if Boromir can't have Legolas all to himself(wish they love each other),then a threesome would be duable.Very kinky huh?.
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  • From ANON - mimine on February 03, 2003
    You're leaving it here? Evil woman! More, dammit! Oh, well. Quite yummy however short. Now I have to see those two men share the elf! I hope there wll be more soon.


    I like Aragorn's characterisation. I like that he cares for Boromir's feelings in some level (or is perhaps afraid of ending up like Boromir as well). I'm not so sure I like where things are going with this threesome. Boromir suffers very prettily but I certainly don't want to see him dumped.

    Mim

    PS. It looks like we updated our fics at just about the same time, lol. There is more Under the cover of the night. I have it at Bardlands right now. I'll also be posting it here.
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  • From ANON - claire on January 17, 2003
    I really like this story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Datiye on January 07, 2003
    I amvery anxious to see how this situation is going to pan out. I hope that you choose to continue this story. I would really like to find out what happens.
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