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Reviews for Xia

By : driretlan
  • From ANON - Kendra on October 31, 2005
    Dude, I hate flamers, but please get either a beta or spell check!!!! Arwin is supposed to be Arwen, Elron is really Elrond, and you spelled legolas and strands wrong in the first paragraph too!
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  • From ANON - Kittynip9 on February 22, 2004
    No, no, NO! DOn;t leave us hanging there, like that! Keep going! KEEP GOING!
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  • From ANON - Su on February 04, 2004
    This is an interesting story. I don't mean to be harsh but it could use some editing to correct spelling errors, missing letters, and sentence structure. It would be easier to read if the statements made by the characters were put on seperate lines instead of all in one paragraph. Btw, it's "Arwen" and "handsome". I hope I don't come off as mean. I see you have potential to do better and it takes courage to post your story. I admire that.
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  • From ANON - My life on January 03, 2004
    Hmm, I hope indeed you meant this to be a parody. It could have been funny if only your writing techniques would improve some.
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  • From ANON - meg on December 30, 2003
    Best parody of a Mary Sue. Ever! Really funny...nice job.
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