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Reviews for Falling into Temptation

By : Celebrian
  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on May 16, 2003
    Nice to see almost everyone here!!! And you too Cel.
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  • From Ce Coe on April 28, 2003
    I am so addicted to this story! Poor Erestor :(
    I love the pairing of Glorfindel and Elrohir, the way you have developed their relationship has been thoughtful to their characters and very romantic.
    I hope Erestor manages to confide in Elrond, then I hope Elrond kicks Celebrian's arse! heh heh
    Can't wait for ch 14 :)

    Claire
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  • From ANON - Tidmag on March 18, 2003
    Speechless.

    I've been getting those heart pains and stomach feelings that make me know this is one of the best stories I've ever read. It's written so well that it doesn't feel like it's dragging, but slowing building up and simmering like rich broth. Thank you sooo super much for writing this and I thank myself for finding it and reading it. I thank all those who host this story on their site or archive. Thank you for writing. Keep going please.
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  • From ANON - Kreija on December 24, 2002
    I would love to read the story, but the current lay-out makes it very tiring. Could you upload in a different format, so the scentences don't break off this way?
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  • From ANON - hydden on October 28, 2002
    I'm trying not to hate you. It's not hard considering that this a great story. I love the tension between almost every relationship. And the teasing between the twins in this last chapter was funny.


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  • From ANON - UbastisSekhmet on October 18, 2002
    Arggh!! The flustration. Its beautiful but, unfortunately for me, its not finished yet. I want to know what happens, hurry up.
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  • From ANON - Megumi (Celeborn, Silvertree) on October 15, 2002
    Hmm... Interesting concept, but it's a bit hard to follow. It would be easier if you went in and revised the format a bit, so it flows more smoothly. Then same goes for some areas of the fic itself; take a look at sentence structure, and think about where you can combine smaller fragments to make a longer, flowing phrase. Also, you may want to go and add commas in some places, to help break things up in run-on areas.

    Overall, nicely put together. I'll be looking for more! If you want any help with beta'ing and whatnot, feel free to e-mail me (all my info can be found by looking up the author "Celeborn" on this site). *whispers* And love, go into the Edit Details and retype "Falling" in your title. ^^; You're missing an "L."

    (And yes, I'm still waiting for a chance to have a look at your site. ^^; I've just been very busy lately; trying to upload my collection of stories is tiring.)

    Waiting for more,

    -Megumi Takahashi (Silvertree)
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