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By : peniel
  • From ANON - Ghost-of-a-Rose on June 19, 2004
    Oh where to find the words! Brilliant! Magnificent! I wish it was not over! A sequel would be highly appreciated, if only to see the wedding of Rumil and Erestor. The couples are so perfect for one another. And the way you write, you go! I encourage you to write and write. You are talented with structure, plot, and dialogue. I not often leave reviews, unless the work is just so astounding. I just don't know how to relay how much this story touched and moved me.
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  • From ANON - Setare on June 11, 2004
    I´m sorry that it is over now. I would have liked some more chapters, but I really loved the story. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - keri on June 10, 2004
    A wonderful story. Thank you! I enjoyed it very much.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on June 09, 2004
    Had fun reading this story. Liked how you chose to be different by having Erestor and Rumil enjoy their newly acknowledged feelings etc, and wanting to take it slow. Nice to see how all of the Lorien brothers had found someone special in Imladris.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on May 24, 2004
    Those facial cuts must be painful, especially the one on Elladan's lip. Ouch! Elrohir is doing a good job of fussing over Orophin, and making sure that he gets the needed rest for his recuperation. The change in Erestor is more evident in his being less cool and reserved to others now.
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  • From SuziQ on May 16, 2004
    Just keeps getting better and better! I'm jumping in my seat waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - martouf59 on April 30, 2004
    Please.Update soon.Been waiting for a while for it.Love this stoey.So please,more.
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  • From ANON - Kim on April 27, 2004
    Oh my Elbereth,
    Where do I begin. I LOVE this. I had tears streaming down my face reading every chapter. I cried - happy and sad tears, I laughed, or giggled like a child. I felt the love blossoming between the various characters felt the termoil of "what was thought to Be" unrequited love. I fell in love with all these characters myself and in writing this review my heart is full to bursting with love and compassion for all our lovely elves. Each chapter was perfection. Please, please, please add more chapters soon. Do Not give up on this. I look forward to reading other works by this author.
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  • From ANON - giggle on April 21, 2004
    Oh that was so sweet. Everyone seems to be working things out. giggle
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  • From ANON - martouf59 on April 19, 2004
    Good chapter.How about elladan and haldir getting together.Both of them are the only ones single.
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  • From ANON - Teri on April 18, 2004
    Glorfindel dumped a bucket of water over Galadriel. That was great! Okay, I also sense something starting between Haldir and Elladan. Am I wrong? Please don't make me wait too long to find out. I love the way Rumil is breaking down Erestor's barriers. Please write more soon, sooner, soonest.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Twilight on April 18, 2004
    Sorry, Peniel, about my confusion about Haldir's lover!! In the earlier chapter, it said he was grieving a lost lover. Now, your latest chapter makes even more sense why Haldir was so set against Rumil being involved with Erestor, and possibly hurt in the process.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on April 18, 2004
    Erestor has come a long way with Rumil's help to be so open to have Rumil sit in his lap. Can not imagine what it must be like for Erestor to have nightmares almost every single night.

    Peniel, I'm confused about Haldir and the reason why he is in Imladris. Didn't his lover die and they wanted him to not fall into grief over it? Will have to double check the earlier chapters about it.
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  • From ANON - martouf59 on April 14, 2004
    Thanks god,found your stories here. But please update soon.Told all me friends what they can find your stories on this side.So please,UPDATE>
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  • From ANON - Teri on March 28, 2004
    I just love this story. Mixed pairings and angst is always interesting and you work it very well. I look forward to more.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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