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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 14 - Crucible of Love

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Jayn on July 11, 2005
    Back again for more stories. And I found where i left off too! Very interesting story. I was shocked at what happened though. On to the next story!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anita on January 13, 2004
    Due to some unforeseen troubles at my clinical placement in Canada, I am home again (which means constant computer acces again *g*). And I am greated by a new part with 6 chapters!
    I think part 14 is a very important part in you series as it tells us about Legolas' changing feelings for Elrohir (eventually in a good way). I wanted to smack Elrohir in the head for being so stubborn. Luckily the ever saving lord Elrond is there to say something that penetrates his sons thick skull :)
    Very well written, as ever. And I am looking forward to the next part...it should be fun!
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on January 13, 2004
    I almost cried, I was so happy by the end of this chapter! That was a glorious reconciliation. Legolas is so close to understanding his heart, now that he has finally reailzed he desires Elrohir. It is not so large a jump from the love of a friend combined with desire to romantic love. The courting dance really is a complicated one ^_^

    I have to say, the way you write the scenes of intimacy is beautiful. The style and the way you use language clearly reflects the love and the passion that fill these acts. You get across all of the emotion, which is in this case what is most important, without needing to become overly graphic in your writing. It is truly a scene between two lovers and not pornography. I admire that.

    I look forward to the nextthisthis series. It promises to be as intriguing as the rest, if the summery is anything to go by!
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  • From ANON - Deathangelgw on January 13, 2004
    oh absolutely puuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrific!! Superb!! What a way to bind that ending and now I...WANT...MORE!!!

    wow...the feelings...I was seriously crying in the part before the last cuz it was soooooooo heart breaking!! WOW WOW WOW...incredible!! Have I told you how much I wuv your writing?! YUMMERS!! MORE SOON!! Love, DA
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  • From ANON - Pervy Elf on January 12, 2004
    You had me worried for a moment there. I was afraid that Elrohir was dreaming, and that just would not do. BUT, he wasn't and this chapter is one of the best yet! And not just because there's a couple of naked Elves...'though, that does help a bit. ^.~ Anywho, what a magnificent ending to one of the most worrisome chapters yet! Of course I mean worrisome in a good way. You know, the suspense of an angst riddled story. Great stuff. Most abundant in your writing. I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tinni on January 12, 2004
    I am glad they are friends again.
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  • From ANON - Ithil on January 12, 2004
    Oh, I'm so glad they made up...I just hope that Legolas ends up realizing that he loves Elorhir! Who I am still a bit miffed at though for that little non-con...you're such a good writer!!
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  • From ANON - kirameki on January 12, 2004
    |^___^| Yay, such a happy outcome. Expected though it was, I loved it. I knew Legolas wouldn't let things stand as they were. And it seems he is being at least a bit more open with his feelings, even if hesn'sn't realize them yet. |^_~| Can't wait for the next segment of the saga. Sounds intriguing.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on January 12, 2004
    he he he, that was very very very cool! :);) well done I LOVE this series, you go girl!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant, fantastic, amusing, tense, full of drama, just fantastic. I'm filled with anticipation for you next part
    sorry short bedtime :)
    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - HHS on January 12, 2004
    That's so sad!I don't like Elrohir to be sad.
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  • From ANON - Gilraen on January 12, 2004
    Ok now you really made me cry! This was wonderful chapter! Things look brighter now and i so very hope those two get together.. I have stopped long time ago trying to guess what will happen next so i will just wait and see! Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on January 12, 2004
    Absolutly excellent, this story (saga) is getting better and better. very well done

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on January 12, 2004
    Hmm, I should have seen that coming.

    They both, Elrohir and Legolas, have such capacity to love, it is a shame that they put themselves and each other through so much pain. Will Elladan be able to help bridge the gap between the two of them, or will it take many years more? Either way, I am ever enchanted by the sencerity and intensity with which you write, ever touch, every spoken word has a purpose. I wonder what purpose young Aragon will play, more than in his ablilty to touch Elrohir's heart.

    I truly look forward to seeing the eventual resolution to this newest conflict.
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  • From ANON - Elf_Sorrow on January 12, 2004
    EXCELLENT! BRILLIANT! Please continue! This story has me hooked. There is so much emotion and wonderful attention to each characters feelings and thoughts. Great stuff! Pleaaassee update soon!! xxx
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  • From ANON - Pervy Elf on January 12, 2004
    This story is like a rollercoaster on the emotions. My heart felt for Elrohir, knowing still what he did. You write angst incredibly well, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, I hope things work out soon for Elrohir and Legolas. They do work out,...don't they?


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