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Reviews for Bruises

By : neitoperho
  • From ANON - Lindy on February 06, 2004
    I love it, its too short though, MORE!!!! please :-)
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  • From ANON - LissaCh on December 07, 1919
    This is very good! I try to stay away from Mary Sues but s thi this one is Elijah/Orlando (I LOVE ELIJAH/ORLANDO!!!) and they rarely pop up, I just had to read this. I'm very glad you made it 'She' and 'Her'. Gave me goosebumps. I seriously felt like I was the only one in the world who would rather watch them go at it instead of imaging me with etiher one. Joining in is nice too. =^.^= VIVA LA SLASH!!
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  • From ANON - VampireJesse on December 12, 2003
    I usually don't like Mary-Sue fics but yours is really beautiful! Very good!
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  • From on May 12, 2003
    Aw...

    this was amazing!
    Just... perfect! Soo... breathtaking!!!

    ok,... one of my most liked fantasies... but wow... ver ywell described... very well indeed!

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  • From ANON - whitehot on March 21, 2003
    omg. this really made me blush.. :) it was just too easy to imagine yourself under elijah.. and that ' elijah frowned' thingie is SO ic.. i loved it. write more!
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  • From ANON - Devon on February 27, 2003
    Wow ... like someone else said, I think I might have been thinking about something like this myself :) Great story, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - anais chan on February 23, 2003
    this is a good story. for some reason orli/elijah make a good pairing and adding a little female pov is always great. ^_^
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  • From ANON - High School girl mindin' her own businesses on February 08, 2003
    Yeah, it was kind of sweet. Though I still prefer HP slash... You're pretty good writer, I mean REALLY good! Congrats!
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  • From ANON - RubyKudra on January 12, 2003
    Get out of my dreams! :) Seriously, I was thinking about something similar to this earlier. It's quite good. More fuel for the fantasy fire. Thanks!
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