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Reviews for The Feud of Shadow and Light

By : Havetoist
  • From Havetoist on December 02, 2004
    Hmmm, my beta did go through this...but in all fairness I may have posted the uncorrected version.

    Want to make sure she isn't held responsible for my mistake.
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  • From ANON - Bird on November 28, 2004
    Oopsies, I apologize...I just read on the yahoo.groups that AFFN is messing up the fics...and that you do have a beta...:D

    So cancel out that first comment...

    Thought I have begun reading your other fics, and am completely hooked! They are wonderful...:D
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  • From ANON - Bird on November 27, 2004
    I like this! I hope you will continue it, because you have caught my attention.

    Do you have a beta? You might consider one, you do have a few minor gramatical errors.

    Other than that, I am quite intrigued by the story! I completely support those who take Tolkien's world and spinoff their own.
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  • From ANON - Vi Janaway on February 21, 2004
    What a very good start.
    Intricacies and good storytelling

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  • From ANON - Chris on February 10, 2004
    It is amazing to me that you can write two separate stories and have them so intertwined. I love how you are creating such wonderful characters. Thanks.
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