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Reviews for The Phoenix and the Griffin

By : Havetoist
  • From ANON - Mel on August 16, 2004
    This is still one of the best. I love the characters, the plot, the dialogue. I check every day for an update.
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  • From ANON - marcianightengale on July 22, 2004
    Loved it, loved it, loved it.......desparately hoping that you'll be adding to it sooooooooon. Thank you so very much. All of your characters are real. kudos.
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  • From ANON - Jana on May 24, 2004
    Thanks from me also for straightening out the chapters. I love how the husband/wife relationship between Phaila and Amaras is developing. I loved the original story and can't wait to see how you weave it all together. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - Mary on May 20, 2004
    Thanks for straightening out the chapters...and adding new ones. Love it, love it, love it!
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  • From Havetoist on May 20, 2004
    The chapter screw up is fixed....darn, sorry 'bout that.

    I hope you are enjoying!
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  • From ANON - Mary on May 17, 2004
    Chapter # 11 is out of order. Chapters 12 & 13 are the same. You are missing the chapter when Phaila is called to service.
    I like the re-writes. You've made the sequence of events clearer but kept the dialogur that I love so.
    Are you going to post on Open Scrolls too? Your story is a little behind there.
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  • From ANON - Havetoist on May 14, 2004
    To those reading - Yes, I renamed the story. I have posted more chapters in Open Scrolls....hint, hint
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  • From ANON - Mary on May 01, 2004
    Did AFF change the title of this? Isn't this Amaras and Phaila? Please update soon. I just re-read the Phoenix and Griffin and NEED more!!!
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  • From ANON - Jay on April 04, 2004
    Beautifully written as usual. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Jay on March 24, 2004
    This is wonderful! The lilt of the dialogue is so interesting and the characters are superb. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Jana on March 18, 2004
    It's been awhile but I want you to know I am still thoroughly enjoying your story. I've guided some of my friends to your stories and they also find it wonderful (even though they are too lazy to write a review)! This chapter was so smooth and easy...a wrfulrful transition for what's to come. To see Amaras and Phaila in a normal home-like situation was a treat. Wouldn't it be fun to actually know peolikelike them? Your dialogue (very different) is pleasing to the ear and perfectly suited to your story. I love the Hungarian touch!!!
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  • From ANON - Cam on March 05, 2004
    Wonderful, beautifully written. I don't want this to end...even though I know it will.
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  • From ANON - Chris on March 03, 2004
    Please! When are you going to post a new chapter? Your writing is so good...I can hardly wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Chris on February 19, 2004
    This is so beautifully written. I love every sentence, every paragraph. You've made Amaras and Phaila so real, I feel like I know them. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Jana on February 12, 2004
    I love this story. The dialogue between characters is so interesting. I can't wait to read more.
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