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  • From ANON - fsd on November 22, 2005
    i love gay sex
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  • From ANON - numskull on November 17, 2005
    It was sooo gay
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  • From ANON - June on January 05, 2005
    I have a question....chapter 2 you left the comment:
    (Author’s Notes: It has come to my attention that I should clarify things by stating that eventually Lord Elrond and the elves from Rivendell will be making an appearance in this story. I just have to get through much of the backstory before that can happen. Please be patient!)
    The never did show up....don't get me wrong, I enjoyed you story. thanks for sharing.
    June

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  • From ANON - Breon Briarwood on August 17, 2004
    Poor little elf! He'll never feel safe or free again! And just WHAT(!) did Wess do to bring them there?
    More please! :D

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  • From ANON - zani on July 14, 2004
    I am really enjoying this fic. It is very good but there are two things that confused me and I hope that you can clearify them. In chapter 12 when you introduce Laurilyn you state that she is an only child; "Upon his deathbed he granted the care of Taelin to his only child", but later in the chapter you state that she has a sister; "I would feed you whilst my sister runs to town", which is it. The other thing that confused me was the description of Taelin's eye color in chapter 13. All the way up until chapter 12 Taelin's eyes are stated as being blue; "surprised at the sudden opening of crystal blue eyes" (ch 12), but in chapter thirteen with Taelin's encounter with the Gondorian his eyes are described as being green; "Taelin swallowed turning frightened green eyes". I was wondering if you can give me a little clearity about these incongrueties. Please keep writting like I said before I am immensely enjoying this fic of yours. It is very creative and original. Please continue the good work and update soon.

    Zani
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  • From ANON - Faracy on June 24, 2004
    Did his original master keep records. There must be some kind of book that recorded where his children were sold.
    Such a grim, unhappy, dreary existence. and the master and his cronies were never punished.
    Don't let it all be a further crueltyet het his freedom be for real.

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  • From ANON - Jander on June 06, 2004
    Wow!!! What an EXCELLENT Story!!! It is outstanding!!! Please continue with the next chapter!!! I hope Taelin's torment is SO to be over!!! I can hardly wait!!! I Love It!!! Thank You!!!
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  • From ShadowLink06 on May 13, 2004
    Nothing bad will hn ton to Daela right...right?!
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  • From ANON - Kazel on May 03, 2004
    Great story, very well written. Can't wait to see what happens to poor Taelin, I wonder if he'll ever be free. Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck! :)
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  • From ShadowLink06 on May 01, 2004
    Aw...poor Taelin. Please continue I want to know what's gonna happen
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  • From ANON - Kazel on April 11, 2004
    Great story, I'm really enjoying it. :-) Looking forward to the next chapter! Good luck!
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  • From ShadowLink06 on April 02, 2004
    Ah, you updated, so good, please continue *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Geek6 on March 30, 2004
    Hi.. i've read it.. thought i'd review it.. (something i rarely do!).. i enjoyed it.. poor Taelin i'm looking forward to finding out he escapes.. i hope you update soon.. *hugs*
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  • From ShadowLink06 on March 25, 2004
    Wow!! You certainly do have a way with words. I'm highly addicticted to angst stories and this is one of the best ones I've read!! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Layne on March 23, 2004
    Very well written! Each chapter made me eager to read the next. Keep going! =)
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