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Reviews for Welcome to Rivendell

By : AmoureuxDeSang
  • From ANON - SisterErotica on July 26, 2006
    For godness sake write more! write more damn you! I really want to see more of this but darn you, you haven't posted anything new. *sigh*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - Joseph on April 19, 2005
    You have to update this! This story is so fuckin' hot! I need more!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 12, 2005
    OMG! Is there any more to this story or are we to think that if you want to hide out with the elves, your body is for their use and brutal use at that? Different kind of elf story.
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on April 11, 2005
    Makes me wish I were a virgin! That was incredibly hot!
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  • From ANON - Lilslasher on February 13, 2005
    Wonderful story!
    I particularly enjoyed the way you left out her name, implying that she is unimportant to Elrond, having no identity, less than human.
    He gets what he wants and in return certain humans can enjoy the safety of Rivendell until the elves leave. To me it implies that the humans must reduce themselves to a subservient level in order to stay among the elves, who are superior.


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  • From ANON - Nienna on January 24, 2005
    WHO is 'She?' Does she have a name? Is she Elven, human, demon??? Why is she there? And why is sex and/or her virginity the deciding factor? Safety from what? Definitely continue this, because this just doesn't make sense and you have a TON of questions to answer! FYI, you need to tell us the character's NAME, usually by the end of the first paragraph.
    Now, get to work!
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  • From ANON - Island Dreams on January 22, 2005
    You should deffinately expand on her story some more like why she's in Rivendell
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  • From ANON - dee on November 08, 2004
    I say go for it keep up the writing.
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  • From ANON - Meghan on June 15, 2004
    Wow! You should definately keep this story going. I love it! I like to see how they handle the
    "morning after", ect.. there's a lot you could do with this story. I know I'd read it.
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  • From ANON - Tenar10r on June 14, 2004
    sence
    repeted
    hermind
    moaved
    carrassed
    chissiled
    Spell-check, please spell-check! I suggest running your story through 'Word' or even an email edit program
    that will spell-check for you, some even do a grammar check as well. Take the time to proof read before
    you publish as well. I think you havgoodgood start but this story was a difficult read just due to the grammatical
    and spelling issues. You have a good handle on keeping a scene lively and exciting. Your over all descriptions
    are vivid. Your story is definitely worth reading, and I hope you write more; just polish it a little before you
    present it. Your writing has a spark that many others are definitely missing!


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  • From ANON - Litz on June 05, 2004
    Well, I can tell you that I liked it. Very much so. Elrond as a horny virgin-ruining elf-lord. Fascinating. Go ahead and write more. I can't wait to see what could happen next.
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  • From ANON - Tinx on June 03, 2004
    Wow! i think you should definately carry on with her i want to see how they handle the aftermath of this!
    i enjoyed reading it PLEASE carry on!
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  • From ANON - TicTac on April 26, 2004
    Very nice, I'm enjoying it so far. And to answer your question, why not do both? Introduce more girls and let them all get to know each other. Perhaps they could plot some sort of group revenge.
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