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Reviews for A Night of Comfort

By : helfireclub
  • From ANON - Lioncourt on September 10, 2006
    I would be delighted if you updated this story. It really warmed my heart. Please mail me if you post another chapter?
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  • From ANON - Vi Janaway on September 16, 2003
    This was gentle, sensuous, anmantmantic. And believable.
    Very good.
    Is there another chapter?
    Thank you
    Vi
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  • From ANON - anna on September 10, 2003
    this is a very good idea for a story... it makes perfectlnse.nse. only a minor suggestion: i feel in the beginning the development is too fast. you should take more time with this. i donīt think both characters would rush a situation like this, it just couldnīt be so easy. i mean, they hardly exchange more than a few words before they end up in bed - especially elrond i canīt picture to behave like that. itīs just a suggestion, i think your story would be even better with a bit more care to the development. it would create much more tension between the two, for example... plus, maybe you could play a bit more on the different customs between the two races - there are bound to be more, right? i mean both socially and sexually...;-)
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  • From ANON - witchbaby on July 26, 2003
    I loved this y! y! Gilraen and Elrond-it makes perfect sense! I wish I had thought of it. LOTR is desperately short of mothers, and to read about a mother treaas aas a sexual being is certainly refreshing. I would love to read more in this same vein.
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on January 27, 2003
    I want to read more about Elrond's other lover.Who was she?Or is it a he?
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  • From ANON - Isa on January 26, 2003
    That was great!
    How about a sequel with the story of the other lover?

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