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Reviews for No Way Out

By : Astron
  • From Astron on May 26, 2004
    lol my sis is like that all the time too. And the stories supposed to get you all worked up, otherwise it wouldn't be any good would it? That's the point of a story, in my opinion to capture the readers intrest and keep it there until the end (though i didn't honestly think I was going to do that with this last chapter for it does seem to be alot like an earlier one.) Ill update asap but I honestly got alot of stuff going on right now, and this story is trying to keep me running in circles I think. Ive rewrote some of the chapters about five times until I got them close enough to the way I wanted them. ANyway Im rambling on now, if this type of chapter is your kind of thing then thats good I guess cause I think its gonna be kinda like this for the next two chapters at least. Yes I already have a very foggy idea of where this story is going if you were wondering, but Im not tellin ya so don't ask, because not only am I not entirely sure, but that would ruin the story. Im rambling on again I know it, but Ive got a lot to say and no time to say it. So. Sorry about the whole spelling thingy, honestly sometimes I just type so fast, or am just so worn out I don't even notice the spelling mistakes, and though spell check is handy, its soooo friggen annoying, everytime I go to work on the story it tells me that things like Frodo are spelled wrong, heck it even thinks I spell my own name wrong! Thats one of the reasons I hate using it, but you probably dont care, heck I doubt most people even read these, but I figure if the ppl take enough time outta their lives to review my stories I can take enough tout out of my life to write back to them. Ok since I know your getting bored now, with good reason since Ive just written like enough stuff for a short story, Im gonna shut up now and go. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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  • From ANON - Jesse Girl on May 24, 2004
    Agh! You got me all worked up and then it stops!! Uuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttteeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is really good so far, poor Frodo. A small bit of advice, though, could be to use a spellchecker or have someone look over your work. Sorry, I'm just such a perfectionist with words (I'm always correcting my friends at school), but other than that, good job, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From Astron on May 02, 2004
    ouch, that would hurt! working on the next chapter already!
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  • From ANON - ? on May 02, 2004
    Write more or i shall ram gandalf's staff up your boo-tay!
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  • From Astron on May 01, 2004
    glad ive been able to keep you interested in the story!
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  • From ANON - Cait on April 30, 2004
    Awww chapter 3 was so sweet.
    Update soon. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Astron on April 29, 2004
    I am hoping that i can keep making this story work, though i have no clear view of whats going to happen, and the endings in a complete blur, still it may work for the better that way.
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  • From ANON - Kasota on April 29, 2004
    This is really good so far. I hope you decide to keep updating.
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  • From Astron on April 25, 2004
    Im glad you like this story, lets hope if i make another chapter that i dont ruin the whole thing, i seem to do that alot.
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  • From ANON - Cait on April 24, 2004
    I'm likeing this very much so far.
    Poor Frodo. Poor Legolas. Update soon.
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