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Reviews for Beyond Borders

By : Kiava
  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    It would be great if you could get rid of the surprises and the votes and guesses and just write the story.
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  • From ANON - The doctors In on January 11, 2006
    Extremely long authors notes that are distracting in the format of the chapter. Too much playing with reviews and not enough commitment to the story.
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  • From ANON - Sara on January 16, 2005
    This is good but there is one thing about it that disturbs me. When everybody dies why doesn't Aragorn even react, I mean all his friends, his foster father and his lover get brutally killed and he doesn't even bat an eyelash, what's up with that?
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  • From ANON - Greenp4lm on September 16, 2004
    Nice to hear from you again :)
    I think a preview at the end of a chapter is great, but please don't tease! You will drive me crazy if I read the review and the update took a very long time. But I can understand, writing a fic is difficult and draining your energy.
    I hope you can make it with the story. I give you my full support ;)
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on August 29, 2004
    Hi, I'm so glad that you finally update this fic. I thought you're gonna ditch it, I was soo worried. I wonder who the girl is. Has she made her appearance in previous chapters? I'm begging for a hint here :)
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  • From on August 17, 2004
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put the next chapter up soon! ^_^

    This is the most original story i've read so far and i think it's amazing, i wish i could put my imagination into a story like that, sadly i can't get things down on paper very well.
    I love the language you and your friends invented it flows so well with characters, i also love the way you desribe the city, i've got the image of the city in my head so clearly. God there is so much more i could put but i'll wait and see what the next chapter has in store.
    I'll be looking for more of your work while i wait.

    *+*KittyQ*+*
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  • From ANON - boundlight on July 20, 2004
    this is a fasinating story! Much diffrent than what I thought it would be, but in a good way. Please ue soe soon!
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  • From ANON - Palkitty on July 05, 2004
    At least you shall have reviews this chapter!!!! ^_^ It's a good story and it definentally plays on a angle. It's nice and refreshing. keep up the good work. ~Pal
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on June 16, 2004
    this chapter's great, but you'll have a lot of explaining in order, lol. I like your description of Legolas' family, it kinda lightening the mood. And about Ida, it's very sad actually to know her own end.
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on June 14, 2004
    Wow, a very soon update he he he. Chapter 4 is soo sweet and sad, you made me wanna cry and I changed my mind about Etine, I thought she was a royal bitch but she turned out to be kind albeit stern, good for a queen.
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on June 04, 2004
    Oh my gosh, it was a total carnage. You killed everybody, poor Elrond, I like him very much. Seems Leggy was starting to get on Aragorn *grins*. Up date soon, please please.
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  • From ANON - Gillian on May 24, 2004
    Haha...Ok, we'll make a deal: I won't hump the story if you update this and Maniacal Laughter very soon. Another great chapter, I love the language you made up. Etine is really cool, the outfits you describe sound gorgeous. I had that Never Ending Story tiara when I was in kindergarden because I dressed up like her for Halloween. Again, much goodness with the story, always intriguing to read.
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on May 21, 2004
    *hides from maniacal laughter's fans* I wust ust kidding. Please donaim aim me. Oh I forgot to tell you that I like the role Arwen and Eowyn play, they kick ass.
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  • From ANON - greenp4lm on May 21, 2004
    I love your fic especially the language, I think it's cool. So please update soon, and ditch your other fics
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on May 13, 2004
    Definetly :) and another great chapter

    huggs
    louise
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