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Reviews for You Broke My Heart…

By : sivan325
  • From ANON - Cait on June 17, 2004
    OMG! That was so depressing. Poor Legolas. *cries*
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  • From ANON - Wanda on March 14, 0000
    It is a good start. I wish the chapter had been longer but then I always say that I enjoy getting lost in a good fiction without having to move on to the next chapter and waite for it to load
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  • From ANON - Nightley on May 27, 2004
    WOW.... short but very powerful. Am truly speechless. (Just curious - one of the twins?)
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  • From ANON - Anais on May 27, 2004
    Snif! poor leggy! so sad! *kicks unfaithful lover somewhere nasty*
    Nice vignette, but it would be better if you got someone to beta read it for you, there are some pbs with the tenses: like "I collapse on the floor" instead of "collapsed", or some words are missing like "I watched you last time" instead of "one last time". If you want, I can do it, I love to beat read for short stories, its always a satisfying task! I'm not a grammar goddess, but I'm not bad either :)

    Ana

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