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Reviews for The Crash

By : Spoonie
  • From ANON - Lucy on September 28, 2005
    i'm really liking this story, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - angel on May 03, 2005
    great story! more please:)
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  • From ANON - Lady Winternight on January 17, 2004
    The story has potential. Saddly it is extremely rushed, gives details where not needed and not details where they are needed. You give no real feel for the story. You have alot of dialogue but you fail to paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind.


    I wouldn't give up on this story though. If you go back and seriously retool it you could possibly have a great read on your hands.

    I will commend you on writing at het story, apparently something of a rare breed at this site.

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  • From ANON - me on June 01, 2003
    Holy shit!! what's it???????? WHAT'S IT???????? update soon! Great story, by the way
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  • From ANON - Meffa on May 08, 2003
    Great story so far. I cant wait to find out what wasw in the box. Update soon.
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