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Reviews for Wild Blue Yonder

By : ldkelly
  • From liorajean on May 16, 2003
    You could do well to learn the difference between "your" and "you're". Once you've learned the difference, youryour newfound knowledge.

    Also, even though you protest, this smells of Mary Sue. In fact, the protest probably makes it all the more glaring. You know; methinks he doth protest too much.

    The "girl falls in to middle earth" bit has been way overdone. The Mary Sue could be forgiven (well, maybe) if the plot was original.

    Try again, and good luck.
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  • From ANON - Egypt on May 15, 2003
    AAAAAAHHHH! I can't believe you left us with a cliffhanger like that, makes us wonder about whats going to happen next between those two. Oh well, I guess I can wait the the next chapter,but hopefully not for long.
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  • From ANON - Sheryl on May 15, 2003
    I just finished chapt0, t0, this has been good and I am enjoying reading it. Since she is in the military it is pleasing to see she has some handhandhand combat skills. I am still interested to see how this will develop and why she came to be in middle earth. Keep writing. :)
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  • From ANON - Shae on May 15, 2003
    I really like this story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Shape on May 15, 2003
    should I tell you about the sheer stupidity of this fic?!
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  • From ANON - Egypt on May 13, 2003
    Oh my god! you have to hurry up with the next chapter. Especially after giving us hints of whom she's related to.I know exactly whom she resembles, except for she has the green eyes. Know wonder that you described her as being so beautiful. Hints: I'm not going to mention who I know it is that she is related to. some people may not have gotten it.
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  • From ANON - stacey on May 08, 2003
    OMG!!!

    Finally!!! A fanfic that makes Legolas seem real!! He has been my favourite character since I read the books over 20 years ago and I just adored the movie. I've been a little disappointed with fanfics because they never portrayed him the way I saw him. Until I read yours!!! I'm still in shock!!

    Just to let you know, I'm a wr and and would be willing to help you in any way. Not for the credit, just for the fun. I haven't enjoyed fiction so much in ages!!!

    As for your characters - they're excellent. You have done what is difficult in writing. Made the characters seem real. The reader should be able to relate to them in a way that they could fully expect to run into them on the street. And you have done that!!! Good s!!
    !!

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter with great anticipation. Legolas is such a stud muffin!!! He can shoot his arrows (or anything else of his, for that matter, wink wink wink) at me any day.

    Feel free to email me. I'd love to chat!!!

    Stacey

    poohpah@tbaytel.net
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  • From ANON - §¦ ^ on May 07, 2003
    Cute! This story is really good, and from a point of view very different from any I've read before. Can't wait to read more. Keep Writing.
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  • From ANON - Egypt on May 06, 2003
    Hey just reviewing on your story. I love it. I am always interested in a story when humans from our time gets zapped into middle earth, it always seems to bring excitment to the story. Anyways, the story is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sheryl on May 06, 2003
    Very definitely getting interesting, and I like that she has excellent military skills, not a shrinking vt.. t.. Please proceed, I am looking forward to the development of this story.
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on May 06, 2003
    I just started reading this.It really looks promising.I like it when Rain won't let get to her just because she's a woman.
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  • From ANON - Sheryl on May 04, 2003
    Now it is getting interesting. And yes tall is good. what are her fighting skill? Any martial arts?
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