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Reviews for Gifts of the Valar.

By : Jodiodi
  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 26, 2005
    EEEEK! Has Goroth or Morgoth or some other evil spirit possessed Legolas? More soon please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 20, 2005
    So much is happening in the castle. Who is the shadow protecting Charika? Will Orophin be able to maintain his honorable behavior with Alexandra? He is so sweet and he deserves someone of his own. More please.
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  • From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on August 16, 2005
    *shivers* Ooh! I’ve got goose bumps, see? Especially loved the end of this chappie. Looks like we’ve solved one mystery only to come across two more. Who left the diary where Erestor could find it? Who’s watching Rumil & Charika through their mirror? And who left the cigar smoldering in the ashtray? *grins sheepishly* Oops, sorry, been watching too much Young Frankenstein, I guess. Can’t wait to find out what else is going on. Oh, and by the way, any idea where I can find some of that water? I don’t want to be immortal, or anything, I just don’t want to have to dust anymore! *grins*
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 14, 2005
    Will our group be able to banish Goroth's shade to the void? Will they figure out what the other shadow is? Still love this story. More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 07, 2005
    Will our friends be able to clean this place of it's evil and set the poor souls free? Charika is turning out to be so strong and so kind. She deserves a good life now. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Dread Lady Freya on August 03, 2005
    Phew! I’ve finally caught up! *grumble* Stoopid RL! *grumble* I am really enjoying this story. So glad you didn’t kill off Charika, poor things been through so much. Ah, if only we all had our very own elf to see us through the hard times. *sigh* These mysteries our heroes are trying to untangle have me on the edge of my seat. Oh, and Charika’s “encounter” in Goroth’s chamber gave me the heebie-jeebies. I REALLY need to know what’s keeping the spiders and bugs and dust out of the keep, I mean if it helps with the housework, it can’t be all bad, right?
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 31, 2005
    The mysteries are deepening in this place and Charika is very important to solving them. More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 24, 2005
    YAY for Charika! Interesting about her strategy for protecting her child. I still feel like she is in danger (maybe what Legolas did to heal her) and it seems Helcarin will be necessary to battle the evil. More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 18, 2005
    Yuck! Filthy vampires are back. And it sounds like Helcarin's path is going to be dangerous. More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 10, 2005
    New mystery here: map! And that nasty is tormenting poor Charika again. Good to see her trying to take back some control over her life with the weapons training. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 02, 2005
    What a wonderful chapter! Are we going to have Charika back? She's such a lovely little thing and deserves some happiness. More please.
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  • From ANON - yue on July 01, 2005
    HEY, Long time no review. sorry. i've been on a business trip to NYC. Man, I expected to get to read aorund 3 new chapters when i got back. what happened? I read ch12 and its not bad, just a bit on the dull side. i enjoyed the teasing of alex about her skills with the bow and that it was a miracle that she didnt get legolas killed. it would be interesting if alex does make legolas's, everyone else that teased her, life miserable for a while for teasing her like that. im so glad that rumil's lover is getting better. she was a sweet character in ur stories, even if her part was small. well i do look forward to ur future updates even if i dont review that often. i have to work more this summer so i dont have much time to do much anymore. if u can could u add a few battle scenes or something bloody into the story?
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  • From ANON - yue on June 17, 2005
    AHH!!! these last two chapters were absolutely breathtaking!! the scene of alex and legolas at the party was HOT and STEAMMING!!! i really like how u mix happy couples with some unhappy ppl like u have legolas and alex and then u have orophin in that lot; then theres rumil & charika, where their relationship hasn't been the smoothest. i really like vanurion's character. i mean he's sounds like a great leader and is mature. he's not at all arrogant and he cares for his ppl a lot! i really hope that he gets accepted by the valor and all.

    really sorry that i havent been updating recently. i've been traveling a lot for work so i havent had time to read and review ur story. i hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on June 09, 2005
    Another trip for some of our Elven friends. Interesting history regarding the Eastern Elves. I hope the Valar can forgive them and let them go home eventually. Will Helcarin help them with their atonement? This is such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 26, 2005
    Thanks for the update. Alex and Legolas stories are always such great adventures which include danger, love, characters and plots. More soon please.
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