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By : Aislynn
  • From ANON - dana on February 08, 2014
    Well written I love it so far I look forward to finishing this tale
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  • From ANON - Gemini Stones on January 29, 2013
    Hello! This story is amazing and I cannot begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed it so far. if there is any chance that you'll continue this story I would be thrilled, as I imagine would many others. Please let me know if you think you'll ever finish thir str as I really want to know what happens with the fellowship and with Elrond's corruption.
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  • From trabeck89 on November 14, 2010
    I...LOVE IT!!!!!!! I read it from 8 last night till 4 in the morning! I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is AMAZING! I'm making my GF read it!
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on September 04, 2010
    Well done, especially with interweaving both the books' and movie canon throughout the tale!
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  • From JirelCahil on December 22, 2009
    I have a feeling that I will not enjoy the visit with Galadhriel. And I freely admit to be following this hopping for a happy ending. Meanwhile, your take on the quest is both entertaining and well written - so long as I gloss over certain bits.
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  • From JirelCahil on December 21, 2009
    I still have many chapters to go before I finish this story, but I wanted to say how much I enjoy your take on how the ring tries to bend the others to its will. It is very like what I imagined when I read the book over 30 years ago - although my thoughts were not this detailed - but essentially it is the same. This story is not to my overall taste, but it is told so well that I am caught and will need to read it all. :)
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  • From KatsuyaX on November 26, 2009
    I'm so glad you updated this story, I just love it=)
    Can't waite for next update^_^
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  • From ANON - Kiriksen on November 15, 2009
    I was so delighted to see that you added another chapter to this tale! I have been afraid that you had abandoned it; I hope you continue this tale- I want to find out what happens to Legolas! Despite the darkness of the tale, I am enthralled. Your character development has drawn me in; their internal conflicts seem genuine. Aragorn's confusion comes through, his desire to protect Legolas from others and from himself- I'm eagerly waiting to find out what he does in the end. Does he extend the spell to Haldir or another Elf? Does destroying the Ring break the spell? Please don't abandon this story!

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  • From ANON - bulma90_13 on March 06, 2009
    this is such a masterpiece! at first i thought legolas was a little too ooc, but given the circumstances...very dead on. and i love how you use the movies and books to make it seem like this is the untold story!
    very exciting story.
    haldir...crying?!?! wtf is going on!?
    can't wait for an update!

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  • From Galasriniel on January 24, 2009
    As dark as this story is, I find it fascinating. I must admit, though, I just want to hug Legolas and make it all better. But the story you've told is unique and I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Feyval on November 27, 2008
    Hi^^

    you once mentioned that you write in German.. but still, I will keep this in English, understandable for everybody.^^

    Wow. What a wonderful storyline you have woven into the Lord of the Rings. You even combined the movies and the book! That's a good one, because both of them have their advantages: the jokes and the action in the movies, and the wonderful story of the book with all its details. But this is to be about your text, no?^^ First I was sceptical about such a long fanfiction, but now I am sad that you did not get any further until now. I find myself walking down the street and thinking: poor Legolas! And nasty Sauron, corrupting Elrond like that. I do not want to imagine what Sauron himself does to h i s captured beings. No... T_T Did you ever think about that?
    And what I wanted to ask from the beginning: does this fanfiction exist in German, or did you write it entirely in English? It would be great to read it in German, but it is not much of a difference. I thought this had been written by a native speaker.^^ Sometimes you used too much of the movie's text, for my taste. I like the book better. I loved how you described the development of the early relationship between Aragorn and Legolas. Still, Aragorn is strange somehow... he seems emotionally unintelligent to me sometimes. xD *knocks his head* But he is truly human, this strangeness only emphasizes that fact, and I can only like him for it. Erestor is d a r k! Huh! really... gloomy^^ I love gloomy Elves. He and Elrond and the corrupted main characters are evil, but sometimes they seem not clever to me, like Aragorn maybe. Elrond is the best example. Why would he endanger his reputation, his honour, his whatnot just to see Legolas suffering? Is his mind that taken by the ring? That would be the only excuse for such actions. oÔ Strange Elrond. *scratches* Does he have such a temper to act like that? I do not understand him...^^°
    8^.^8 Ooooh, but I love Elves! How happy Legolas was when he found that spot of light in Moria! How cute when he is talking to the trees, when he is amused about Boromir noticing his phosphorensic skin. xD I would help him. I would carry Frodo all the way to mount doom to help him, really.
    *coughes* What I wanted to say is: Your characters are wonderful. I can see them before me, and they shape anew when you free from the directly given storylines in book and movie. What a lucky plotbunny you've gotten here!^^ Please, go on soon! I am so eager to learn about Haldir and Orophin and Rumil and their apparently sad story. How will Galadriel be? And what about Boromir dying? And the race through Rohan. Will Legolas be in danger? What about the friendship with Gimli? Oh, and when Gandalf finally returns... and Saruman! Wow xD Now, that would be really cruel, to bind a slave to an Uruk-Hai. oÔ How did I come to think about that? xD I used to like some torture in fanfictions, but it is the most interesting when the villain is only an antagonist, convinced that he is on the good (or right) side and the others are bad or at least stupid.^^ In your fiction, the torture is a really bad matter, and nothing to enjoy, but that's only right.
    Poor Legolas, again. I hope you find a time to continue! You cannot have a lack of inspiration, can you?^^ I will provide you with feedback if I can. I definitely intend to.^^
    Elves rule!^^v *smirk*
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  • From KatsuyaX on November 03, 2008
    I really Love this story, waited so long for a new chapter...
    Keep it Up=) Your writing is really good=) Wanna read more:)
    Upload more^__^

    ~huggels~
    If you update a new chapter soon, you'll get a cookie;)
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on October 25, 2008
    I saw your update and squealed with glee! I was beginning to think you had abandoned this lovely story; but I am really glad you have not. Thank you for this wonderful (and somewhat disturbing) update. I can't wait to see what is wrong with Rumil...
    Will be eagerly awaiting more!

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  • From ANON - Katrina on July 06, 2008
    I like this story very much, its tragic and imaginative. But I wish something good would happen to Legolas, or that he would fall out of love with Aragorn. The ranger doesn't deserve him.
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  • From BrucesGirl on April 18, 2008
    Silly me taking my sweet damn time to review. Again, your beautiful plot drew me in. I'm getting very fond of the conflict between Aragorn and Legolas. I see slave and master who both have a mind of their own, but they love each other so much. It really just tears up the reader that Aragorn has to hurt Legolas to fulfill his part of the bond.

    My expressed hope is that you don't make Haldir a bad guy solely because he had always been one of my favorites as Glorfindel has been. I absolutely am riveted. Ok, soon-er has past.

    New chapter please! *throws a cookie*
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