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Reviews for Hearts Veiled

By : Soar
  • From Safir84 on January 09, 2010
    Awesome one-shot you’ve here, I loved it, even though the story contains Mpreg situations/scenes, I’m really not o fond of them, but if the story’s well written (much like this one) and etc. I can (and will) make exceptions, laughs! Anyway, the plot’s awesome and so was the character portrayal and character interaction too, (especially Aragorn/Legolas) of course! Everything was also extremely well written and the smut was too, indeed very nicely described and steamy as well, the love scenes were absolutely beautiful in other words and very realistic too! Kudos! So, Aragorn’s is rather kinky, eh, ropes, nice!

    “To Legolas it felt like hours passed as he was gripped by contraction after contraction, each time using his internal muscles to guide the child through the birth canal. He had long since gone past the point of caring about his dignity and didn’t care who saw him with his legs spread wide open, he just wanted this to be over, now. He had serious thoughts of denying Aragorn the chance to ever take him again, just so he could avoid conception, either that, or cut off Aragorn’s balls so that he would not be capable of fathering any more offspring, but still capable of pleasuring him. Yes, Legolas liked that idea very much and with one last, furious push he felt the child slide from his body.”

    Another thing concerning the Mpreg situations/scenes in this story, are that, I would have believed the birthing scene a lot better if you would have skipped the thing (at least writing about it) or having Legolas going through a C - section (Cesarean section), I mean because the whole time I read that particular paragraph, I couldn’t help but think about the fact that Legolas possibly couldn’t have giving birth, (he does not have a womb nor a vagina, so a baby couldn’t possibly exist in there and come through a body part, which he obviously doesn’t have, sorry I just had to get that of my chest), let alone getting pregnant in the first place, (how did that happen, again?! I would like an explanation) about both the conception and the birth, that would be helpful!

    I realise that it’s probably better to overlook silly things like this and I know, I’m being difficult, but I just can help it, I’m very picky when it comes to this sort of things, feel free to ignore me! And I’m not against Mpreg stories, it’s just that, I need it to be believable if I’m going to like it/read it, that’s all! Okay, so I haven’t read that many Mpreg stories, just a few, so I guess, I’m not that familiar with them just yet! More so, I can more easily buy it, if the conception is a result of a spell gone awry or maybe a mishap in a lab, or something like that, it’s more realistic, I guess, for me at least, oh, well, never mind!

    Otherwise I really liked the ending, it was cute! Thanks for sharing!

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  • From ANON - Yukio on November 16, 2005
    Well, I must say- great story! Steamy, good plot line... I espesiallly loved how you intermingled it with the actual plot and dialogue of the move! Kudo's to you!
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