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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : janalynn27
  • From ANON - memorietrail on October 30, 2006
    sorry to see it end but it was great.
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  • From ANON - Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno on October 29, 2006
    OMG!! This story was AWESOME! AWESOME I tell you! I was able to read this in an hour, and every chapter was better than the last. I adored the part about Lindir having not bonded because his mate was across the shore. YUM! This was way better than eating all the cookies in the world! Hopefully, If I'm not too lazy, I'll come back and re-read the entire story! XD 5 stars, 2 thumbs, etc!
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  • From ANON - Kalima on September 30, 2006
    I'm not quite caught up, but thought I could leave a "thank you" at least. Enjoying your story. I just read tonight somewhere else someone expressing irritation at "reviewers" saying not more than that, but in my experience writers don't really want a critique! Could I offer one suggestion? The repeated translations within the text, even to the point of mentioning that "Ai" was "Ah" isn't really necessary. You can put the translations at the end for those that don't know them. For people following your story (as well as many others'), we know stuff like "mellon nin" means "my friend" and the like. It just interrupts the flow of your writing.

    Anyway, nice romantic tale.
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on August 01, 2006
    Oh wow it just so good.More please.
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on July 19, 2006
    That was great.Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - memoretrail on July 10, 2006
    oh wow what a story
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on July 09, 2006
    wow, I love this! Amazing... I like the way they aren't immediately having sex... but there will be sex, won't there??
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  • From ANON - Daeomae on June 26, 2006
    Ooooh, I can barely wait to see how it goes between those two when Baraon leaves and they're alone. *grins* I just love this story!!! *bounces*


    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on January 04, 2006
    Aaahhh they finally realized that they are soulmates! It is about time! Now eveybody can start healing; even Lindir, does he not? We cannot forget about Lindir, can we? More please!
    Hugs,
    Maelle.
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  • From DurOltha on January 04, 2006
    Ahhhah! *Wimper*

    Want more...I love this, you know, you should make your chapters at least 10ish pages long...that would be...*Slaps self*...my bad, sorry, its just that everytime I get to the end of a chapter you post of this, I sigh "Want more, not long enough!"

    *Snort*

    ~DarkDreamer
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on December 29, 2005
    Oh yes! A little distraction for Thranduil will do just fine! He is a little vain, isn't he, for thinking that someone could not be interested in him? Well, I guess he is quite irresistible but don't tell him I said so!
    Hugs,
    Maelle.
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  • From ANON - Sian on December 29, 2005
    I finally got a chance to sit down and read this, and boy did I enjoy it! Now I'm caught up and can enjoy the updates on list Can't wait to see if Glorfindel is able to heal Erestor, and what a wicked Thranduil you have created!
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  • From ANON - Kalima on December 25, 2005
    I am enjoying your story. I wondered at first that Erestor would be so grieved at having witnessed such athing so very long ago, since I figured that he knows the elves he cares for will be restored to life one day, and are now not suffering as he himself is. Since I kept reading, I decided to take the intensity of his suffereing on faith.
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on December 16, 2005
    Oh that Thranduil! Why can't he just let things go? Although I suppose it had some good that he pushed Glorfindel so because it forced him to admit to himself that he is, in fact, in love with Erestor. But I guess that by going to Imladris with Fin, he will force things to move along. Perhaps it is not such a bad thing after all. Wonderful chapter, sweetie; can't wait for more!
    Hugs,
    Maelle.
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  • From ANON - juza on December 16, 2005
    yes, yes, yeeeeeeeees. this is a very good story and i want you to make longer chapters and more exciting. will Erestor and Glorfindel have sex, i hope so hehe.





    and i will see what will happe, Erestor will surely be" gharw why glorfindel why did he do this, arghh" and glorfidnel willsayd" i´m so sory erestor, plese forgiv me" and they will have sex, hot sex.


    with the sucking and the licking and the cumming, wow i cant wair, woho ;)
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