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Reviews for The Taking of Vaneloss� - Part III

By : Sinkitty2
  • From ANON - MarzBar on February 04, 2006
    Thank you for a beautiful story. I hope they all went to Valinor and finished healing.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on February 04, 2006
    Beautiful chapter. I hope Vanelosse will be able to recover in spirit as well as in body. Her beautiful husband and children should help her. Thank you so much for sharing.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 26, 2006
    Legolas did have the appropriate revenge. i was relieved that Orophin got some justice, too. I hope they can go home now and resume their lives together with their children.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 20, 2006
    Good torture for Larin! I hope his cronies are being treated as well as he is. I am quite willing to wait for Legolas' ultimate revenge as long as Vanelosse gets well. More story please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 17, 2006
    GRRRRR ARGH!! I am happy that the elves have found the captives but my lust for revenge is probably much greater than the good guys in the story. It always seems to be that way. I can hardly imagine a torture and death painful enough for Larin and his cronies.
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  • From ANON - eggy on January 16, 2006
    I sually dont like lotr ff, but I absolutely adore this story. Your writing is so vivid and often heartbreaking. I can really picture myself there. You've done an awesome job with Larin. What a bastard- I hope he gets what he deserves!! More please!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on December 24, 2005
    GRRR ARGH! Such filth and degradation committed by humans against elves for fun. I pray Vanelosse and her friends are rescued soon.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on December 18, 2005
    YIKES! You got right to the violence quickly in this story. This poor elleth is being so brave but has no idea what she is facing. I will wait for more story.
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