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Reviews for The Dark Star of Gondolin

By : Lynsey
  • From ANON - Jannet on December 12, 2013
    Owww, please continue writing this and the other stories you have...they are amazing and I really want to know what happens, please, please, please???. I think i saw one of your stories on fanfiction, but no matter which place you post, just write more please :)
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  • From Faoiltierna on October 01, 2008
    Oh! That last bit was so sweet! Please, please I hope the babe lives too--so Erestor has someone to live for when Glorfindel dies!

    :sniffles:
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  • From balrog on October 01, 2008
    This is getting quite good. I feel for Durel. He needs some happiness in his life and I think Glorfindel will be there for him through it all. Nice chapter.
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  • From Kalima on September 05, 2008
    I've always avoided the hermaphrodite stories, but I remembered that you are a skilled writer.

    Although I hate to think an elf society could be so cruel, certainly your story is intriguing and so well written that I am addicted. I've never read a story about a courtesan-hero before and am surprised I could be so sympathetic to one who can be manipulative as well as sympathetic. Your characters are most believable, exept for the fact that elves are supposed to be so noble. (We'll have to assume that Tolkien was handed an very whitewashed version of them.)

    I am touched that you (and others) would write for my pleasure for no monetary return. Thank you. I hope you aren't too busy to update.
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  • From balrog on August 24, 2008
    I now see the love between these two is going to be precious. Their love is beautiful. Thanks.
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  • From balrog on August 01, 2008
    Poor Durel. That Maelgin I never liked. He was always trouble. As for Turgon, he's no better. Nice job.
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  • From balrog on July 31, 2008
    I love the way this story flows. It's amazing how you wrote Durel so sensual.
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  • From Faoiltierna on May 03, 2008
    I absolutely love the way you write such believable characters. I would love it more if you were to update, though! :-)

    Yes, I've been going through my lists of stories I keep an eye on :grin:
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  • From Kuragari75 on August 12, 2007
    wow. I love this story... it's so moving. Turgon's kinda pissing me off though... ok he is alot... ;P but I hope you are planning on continuing.... it's really really really well written!
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  • From memorietrail on June 27, 2007
    Oh wow ... Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Lily on November 07, 2006
    HI!!! I was so very happy when i saw the newest chapter of this wonderful story!! I really love your fics specially this one-- so i hope your muse keeps inspiring you 'cause i really wanna see the end of The dark star of Gondolin. i wonder if there will be any baybies in the future of our wonderful pair, that would be a very happy ending!!
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  • From ANON - dragan sator on October 14, 2006
    I surtenly hope this story won´t end here.
    please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Julia on July 05, 2006
    Here is my beef with the story so far. As Glorfindel's courtesan, Durel cannot chart his own destiny in life. He is basicly a slave. He is not even free to love any but Glorfindel. But Glorfindel could have granted him a sort of freedom by not treating him like a courtesan. But he didn't. He claimed Durel as his own-- the way he had Durel sleep in his bed every night. And when he found Durel and the king together, instead of thinking to himself "Well, maybe Durel has found love. I love him, but he is not my property, he is free to love whome he will", he could only think of himself and his own wounded heart. The way he treated Durel is sick and I hate him. I think you should rework the last chapter unless you mean for us to hate Glorfindel.
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  • From ANON - Dee on July 04, 2006
    Wow! this is really good who I do hope you will continue it I am dying to know the outcome.
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  • From ANON - Julia on June 28, 2006
    Please Update more than once a month. It's very difficult to get into a story when it's dragged out in this infernal manner.
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