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Reviews for Stolen Innocence Regained

By : EmmaSmith
  • From Dawn2009 on May 26, 2012
    Great story. Please continue writing and updating chapters
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  • From ANON - mimi on December 18, 2010
    good so far please update!
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  • From ANON - Faerie In Combat Boots on March 25, 2009
    It would be much better if you broke the story into smaller paragraphs, especially when there is dialog. In fact, Dialog should be it's own paragraph, not part of one. Indent your paragraphs, check your spelling and do a little more character development. All I know about your OC is that she's a victim, there has to be more to her than that right? You're writing a very common fanfiction theme and need your story to stand out.
    And one more thing, add more detail, you're moving too fast through your story.
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  • From IntegraHellsing on January 13, 2009
    This is very good so far. I am curious to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - smoky heather on October 18, 2008
    i really like this, it's a nice spin -x- keep it up
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  • From AceSpades on August 31, 2008
    hey this is good id like to read more. longer chapters lol :) hope you update soon.
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  • From deceit on July 15, 2008
    this seems like it could be a good story. I like it so far. I cant wait to see where you take it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 09, 2008
    I like this story. I hope that you update soon.
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  • From KageMori on April 05, 2008
    this is really really good so far. i truely hope you continue this story. please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Liv Scully on March 22, 2008
    Excellent idea and great momentum within the plot and pacing. Please keep going!
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  • From seductivemessiah on February 18, 2008
    pretty good so far
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  • From ANON - R-C on June 11, 2007
    I'm liking this story so far, Courtney's touched my heart. Keep going please.
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  • From Mesamea on April 25, 2007
    hey I like it keep it up
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