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Reviews for Chains Unseen

By : Mawgy
  • From Lexin on December 18, 2008
    I'm sorry this story seems to have come to a standstill, I'd like to see more of it.


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  • From SacreAranel on October 15, 2008
    Can I have som'ore please? I love this story. I didn't find it till I looked @ your author page. I definately see more coming!
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  • From Faoiltierna on May 03, 2008
    So, really hoping you intend to continue this story and update soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - Yedra on December 26, 2007
    Dear Mawgy,
    I love your story so far. But something tells me Erestor with his low self esteem will be stupid enough to get pregnant to soon. What were his parents talking about in the fourth chapter anyway? He seems to have to be pregnant within a fixed time due to this damned contract signed so many years ago?
    Talking of parents - everybody is grumbling about Glorfindels mother. But what about Erestors parents? Selling their child off, consenting to not rising it themselves, to not even seeing it, to allow it to be taught having no own free will (so it is even considering it's own live worth nothing but being a birthing machine). That contract is one to the devil. I thought slavery is forbidden by Eru. Why have the Valar not intervended yet? Some lightning bolt to struck down at least one of the signatories would be nice. *grumbles angrily*

    Still I'm looking forward to all new updates and soon please as I am biting my nails here ;-)
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  • From ANON - Layla on December 16, 2007
    Curse Glorfindel's mother!! I just want to..to...shove her into a vat of army ants and watch her suffer! GRR! And Erestor's parents aren't nearly AS bad, but still bad! Curses to the parents!

    Other then that.. :3 Such a lovely story between Erestor and Glorfindel you have written. I look forward to the next update.
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  • From Elftart on December 14, 2007
    love it...please don't take so long for update
    great storyline..keep it up
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  • From Tenar10r on December 14, 2007
    Glad the wait is over! This is still a great story.
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  • From Sione on December 14, 2007
    Yes, finally a new chapter! *does happy dance*

    Let me guess, Erestor is not going to take that potion, right? He's going to have that baby whether Glorfindel like it or not. Well, he better keep himself alive then! It would be terrible if he died, but I don't think you can be that mean to poor Erestor...at least I hope not.

    I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

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  • From ArchNemesis on December 13, 2007
    Hmm, I think by reading this chapter and knowing what I now know about Erestor, I firmly believe that Erestor is going to do something in the near future to ensure that he gets pregnant whether Glorfindel wants a child or not.

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kalima on October 05, 2007
    I just read your story so far. I don't care for the "mpreg" thing, but I like the Erestor/Glorfindel pairing, so I thought I'd see if you could persuade me. I find that your universe is shaping up in a consistent way, so maybe I could find it believable. I like the story, but wonder if you'd be open to a little copyediting? ("Whom" is the objective case, "who" is the subjective, so you use "who" when it's the subject of the sentence.) Anyway, thanks for writing. I'm not sure this review will be accepted. I see this note at the bottom about "Due to hijacking, the yahoo groups are pending until further notice," so let's see what happens.
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  • From nascarcrazy24 on October 02, 2007
    I like the way the story is going and one hopes you will update often.
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  • From ArchNemesis on September 23, 2007
    I'm totally loving this fic! Don't worry about how long it takes to update... I'm a little slow myself when it comes to updating.

    Anyway, I see nothing has changed with Glorfindel's mother. Okay, she is one righteous bitch. I can't believe that she is actually willing to risk Erestor's health for the sake of a child. What is she thinking? And now Erestor's parents are being jerks. Although I am curious as to what they were talkingl about at the doorway. So, they made some type of deal with Glorfindel's mother for him (Erestor) to have a child within a certain time frame. Hmm, I guessing at 3 to 6 months 12 tops for Erestor to get pregnant. Something doesn't sound right with that. Why would Glorfindel's mother push so hard for him to have a child?

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From Sione on September 23, 2007
    Ooo how nice to see a new chapter, I been looking forward to it. :)
    Well ok I guess I can put up with her for awhile longer now when Glorfindel puts her in place, yay! I hope it doesn't get too angsty though, poor Erestor! It's good that he has Glorfindel on his side at least.

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  • From Sione on July 10, 2007
    Yay more to read and yes I did like it! I wonder if Erestor will be pregnant or not... I bet Glorfindel’s mum will be pretty mad if he isn’t soon. Couldn’t someone just “accidentally” push her off a high cliff or something? *blinks innocently* ;)
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  • From ArchNemesis on July 09, 2007
    Now, I kind of feel sorry for the healer who had to bear the bad news of Glorfindel not wanting children. Again, I'm sure the Erestor will feel brunt of her wrath.

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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