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Reviews for The Worm and the Doe

By : Mordeo
  • From on June 28, 2009
    This is a really good story. I like the premise, plus it's nice to see a character like Gríma (who's pretty one-dimensional in the book) portrayed as something more complex than just a Bad Guy. Like some of your other reviewers, I would like to see more.

    I hope I'm not being too blunt, but your Elvish could use a bit of work. I'm not even sure which language you were trying for; you said that Éowyn wanted to learn "conversational" Elvish (Sindarin) and not High Elvish (Quenya), but this looks like it is (mostly) Quenya. If you're interested in trying to learn more about these two (and/or other languages that Tolkien created, although Sindarin and Quenya are the two most complete), I recommend Ardalambion (http://folk.uib.no/hnohf/).
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  • From deliriousanddelusional on June 08, 2009
    Wonderfully writtennn.
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  • From ANON - Faerie In Combat Boots on June 04, 2008
    Such a pity this is only a oneshot. It's such an amazing story and would love to see more.
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  • From mortarius on April 12, 2008
    please finish this!
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  • From ametomoe on December 15, 2007
    nice job! eowin always had a weird reaction to grima in the movies i thought, and it's prolly somewhere in the books cause i haven't read them but i always kind of hoped someone would do an eowyn/grma. soo cooool!!!!!
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  • From Rozzan on September 21, 2007
    mmm, this was interesting concept. I can see how the young and lonely Eowen could have a facsination for Grima. Liked at the end how he explained why he had become enslaved by Saruman and the poem was beautiful. Very interesting well written story.
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