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Reviews for As Sparks Fly Upwards

By : TYJA
  • From alma on February 17, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 17, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 17, 2008
    Yay, the twins are good...you had me going there for a second.
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  • From alma on February 17, 2008
    Very good chapter.
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  • From alma on February 17, 2008
    OMG!!! I come back from Italy and find the story finished and a sequel is up...Happy Unbirthday to me!!!!!!!You made my week.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on February 10, 2008
    I never seem to get to your updates right as their posted, but it is nice to come and have a nice group of chapters to read all at once. So much happened in this set, I feel like I'm going to forget something I wanted to comment on. Anyways, I'm glad his parents found him. I will say, I wasn't expecting Thranduil to be his 'mother', but I really don't know much of that character, just what I've read in other stories, so I can't say it's out of place. I like the idea of a red haired, green eyed elf. Very interesting. Almost makes me think of the TA in my physics lab :)

    I'm sorry that Legolas lost his baby. Hopefully with his parents and his soon-to-be (I imagine) bonded there, he'll be okay eventually. And eventually he'll be ready and get pregnant again, maybe a boy this time (I like little boys). I hope they catch whoever pushed him (I'm suspecting it might be the elf who tried to rape him in Rivendell) and I hope he doesn't get to him again.

    Another thing, am I imagining things or does Haldir seem to be developing a bit of a crush on Legolas. If so, how cute :)

    And I guess that's the end of the review, I think I got everything. And I hope you update again soon. Though I guess I don't have to worry about that, since you seem to update so quickly that I always have a nice bunch of chapters to read. I look forward to it.
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  • From xalphaxinfidelx on February 10, 2008
    I like this story, it's interesting. But you need to do some serious work on comma usage. There are thousands of places where a comma was necessary, but not used. It's a very easy thing to work on. Your story is interesting, you use a lot of helpful detail and I like the way you wrote it, you just need to work on the technical aspects ^_^
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  • From JastaElf on January 21, 2008
    I really like this story, and I suspect I know what that queasiness is in Legolas.... :) I'm glad Thranduil is not a mean creepy Elf-Lord, and I hope once the initial fireworks are over he will prove likely to do the right thing and not separate the lovers. Elrond/Legolas is my favourite pairing... :)

    Do you archive anywhere else? I would love to know when you update!

    Thank you for sharing this story!

    Jasta
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 19, 2008
    well I missed the newest updates so I had a nice long set of chapters to read just now. Loved them, you really do write well. You handle the old language of the LOTR series well. I like where the story's going with Elrond and Legolas. I just hope that Thranduil doesn't make things too miserable and that he does well and right for his son.
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  • From Kendikins265 on January 12, 2008
    I really like what you're doing with this fic. :) Keep it up.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 09, 2008
    Your story's good so far. I really like where your taking the story and you write well. One bit of criticism, you really need to watch your punctuation (sometimes it's not there when it should be) and your sentence structure (sometimes things that should be one sentence are 2 and vice versa). Otherwise I'd say it's great and I can't wait for you next update.
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  • From ANON - SweetGirl on December 31, 2007
    update soon
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  • From alma on December 30, 2007
    Totally awesome start. "Body Servant" never heard of that one before...nice!!!! I'm really
    digging it, so I hope you don't stop writing!
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