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Reviews for New Love

By : lillyivy
  • From Faoiltierna on September 06, 2008
    All I can say is More! Please? :-)
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  • From xalphaxinfidelx on September 06, 2008
    You have an excellent writing style, and I love the way you describe things. The only problem I see is in the story telling itself. Things happen too quickly. The elves open up about their worst fears and past troubles with little to no trouble at all. They also describe their stories as if they were narrating them, rather than speaking from a personal perspective. I would say that you need to draw the interractions out further to make them more realistic. Don't let characters just suddenly speak their dark pasts. No real person really does that.

    Honestly, your technical skills are wonderful, I think if you stretched your stories out a little bit in the way of interractions you'd have an absolutely /fantastic/ story (not to say it isn't wonderful already, of course). I hope to read more from you!
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  • From Faoiltierna on August 27, 2008
    Go Glorfindel Go!

    Good story :-)
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  • From Faoiltierna on July 15, 2008
    *sniff* *sad whimper*
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  • From Rozzan on June 09, 2008
    Oh poor Erestor, reliving the horror that had such a terrible effect on him.
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  • From Rozzan on June 03, 2008
    Thanks for the updates. I am liking this story. Like your young twins in Imladris. Poor Cirdan and his dream and then waking to find it was not what he thought. What a disaster. Like the inclusion of Erestor and Glorfindel into the mix. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Rozzan on May 07, 2008
    Interesting start. Loved them getting interrupted. Looking forward to more.
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