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Reviews for Ranger's Folly, Prince's Fate

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From ANON - Selena Rose on September 11, 2014
Please forgive my mistakes in the previous review. I just realized I put seraph instead of seron. I also realized I misspelled ELrohir's name. Please forgive these stupid mistakes. Thank you for your time and this wonderful story. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.
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From ANON - Selena Rose on September 11, 2014
I hope you still read reviews for this story. I know that this story has not seen an update in over 3 years, but I hope that you have not discontinued this amazing story. I realize not many have reviewed and I am sorry for the lack of reviews, because this is one of the best yaoi LOTR fanfics I have ever come across. I must admit I am guilty for not reviewing this story a few years back, shortly after your last update, due to the fact that I was new to fanfiction and thought I needed an account to review. I am sorry it has taken me this long to review. My friends, who have been into fanfiction a lot longer then I have, only showed me a few months back how to review. I started looking for your story a week or so after finding out how to review, but sadly I could not recall the name of the story or the author's name. It took me this long to find Ranger's Folly, Prince's Fate, because I had to go through pages of fanfiction before I finally found it today. I am sorry I went on a little rant there, but I wanted you to know why I my review is over 3 years late. I absolutely love this awesome story. I was both amused and disgusted when Aragorn, Elladan, and Elohir automatically assumed he was a seraph and not even considering the possibility that it was Thranduil's son. I was so thrilled when Elladan, even though he still believed Legolas was a seraph, did the gentlemanly thing by taking off his robe and giving it to Legolas. I am usually not a Elladan/Legolas fan, but I seriously think he would be the better match for Legolas. Aragorn/Legolas is usually my pick when it comes to yaoi LOTR fanfiction. Though I feel that Aragorn has been a perverted jerk not once but twice. That's if you do not count the time he was apologizing to Legolas, in front of his father, for propositioning him in the bathroom with the hopes that Legolas would have sex with him after the feast. The first time of course being when he disturbed Legolas's "private time" in the bathroom to proposition him for sex. The second incident being when he over stepped the bounds of a healer with Legolas when he was clearly drunk and also injured. If you continue this story, which I hope you will, Aragorn will seriously have to redeem himself, in my opinion, if he wants Legolas. I hope with all my heart that you will continue this story, it is to good of a story to leave incomplete. Thank you for writing those 6 chapters and if you can find it in your heart to continue then I would be extremely happy. With all my gratitude, Selena Rose.
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From Raevyn on December 28, 2013
This has such good premise! I read what you have up a few months ago, and I was really hoping for an update :(
I'm looking forward to reading more in the future!
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From Safir84 on January 14, 2011
Another awesome chapter, I loved it, even though; I pretty much felt a little flabbergasted and embarrassed through-out a particular section of this chapter, despite that; it really was absolutely thrilling and whatnot! And I am, of course referring to the scene wherein Elrohir pretends to be Elladan and practically jumps Legolas, (poor thing), I really can�t believe that Elrohir would do a thing like that, assaulting Legolas the way he did, but also going around and kissing people while pretending he�s someone else, he really should be ashamed of himself! What was he thinking?! Ok, so I�m sure he didn�t plan for it to happen; it was probably a spur-of-the-moment-kind-of-thing, when he saw Legolas and all that, he just had to have him, right?!

"One cannot force a seron," whispered the shamed Twin, eyes on his hands where they lay clenched in his lap.� I must confess that I almost saw RED when reading this line, oh; boy did I want to slap the shit out of him, for that comment, that insolent little�, argh! Sorry, I just had to rant a little, my bad!

Anyway, finally all is out, (well kind of), no more rumours, now they know that Legolas� indeed the kings son a not a courtesan, well, at least that�s good! About the fighting that will soon take place (in the next chapter, perhaps?!), when Elladan�s going to fight his brother for the prince�s honour and himself, of course; that will be interesting to say at least, hehe!

And I see, that Aragorn is taking it on himself and to apologize to Legolas while his brothers are elsewhere occupied, very sly of him I must say, but I guess; �All is fair in love and war�, (sp?!), hehe! But, he�s going to get into trouble when Legolas finds out about him lying about why his brothers weren�t there to do the same (apologize and whatnot) and also when Elladan and Elrohir finds out that Aragorn has taken liberties with the prince, or so to speak, hehe!

Which, I must say, I very much enjoyed, of course, seeing as I�m an avid Aragorn/Legolas shipper, hehe! That scene was very nicely described, I loved it! Now I am, of course very anxious to read more, therefore please update soon�

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From Safir84 on December 11, 2010
Awesome chapter, I absolutely loved it! The character interaction was amazing and everything was very well written too, of course! I really enjoyed the first scene at Legolas private chambers, especially when Aragorn arrived, man, that sure was pretty damn hilarious, and poor Legolas even tried to set things right with Aragorn (about the whole misunderstanding thiny), but he just wouldn�t listen, well, he�s loss, I guess!

Anyway, the scene with Elladan and Elrohir was really quite nice as well, not �Seeing Eye to eye�, yeah, and now Elrohir�s going to have a word with Legolas?! That�s just bound to be interesting; wonder what�s going to happen?! Therefore please update soon�

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From ANON - MewMew2 on November 09, 2010
Thank you for updating this fantastic story once more. You have me on the edge waiting for the brothers and Estel to find out Legolas's true identity. Please update once more when you have the opportunity and inspiration to do so.
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From ANON - anonanon on November 03, 2010
^.^ FANTSTIC JOB! Smutt, plot, humor, and excellent use of imagery. This is an amazing story so far. Please update it once more when you have the chance and inspiration to do so.
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From Safir84 on September 13, 2010
Awesome story you�ve got here, I really like it! The plot�s great and so is the character portrayal and character interaction�s too, (especially the relationship between Legolas and Thranduil, they seem very close and sweet together, as father and son), of course! Everything�s also very well written and well described, more so, its pretty humours at times, especially the whole misunderstanding thingy! I was literary laughing through-out the whole chapter (s) feeling quite sorry for them all (mostly for Legolas, naturally) and also quite embarrassed!

So, I gather that it�s going to be love triangle between Legolas, Aragorn and Elladan, huh, sounds pretty interesting, despite the fact; that love triangles aren�t really my strong suite, (I�m more of an A/L fangirl) if you know what I mean, oh, well, never mind, I guess, because I�ll, of course continue reading this amazing story of yours! More so, when I saw the title, I couldn�t help but think; that maybe this story will turn out A/L, given the title, I mean, anyway, I sure hope so, fingers crossed, laughs!

And speaking of Aragorn and Elladan, they still think that Legolas is a courtesan, whoa, are they in for a surprise at the feast later on that evening, when they�re bound to find out, who he is and what he isn�t, should be pretty fun, eh! Shit, is all I can say, however, I must confess, that I rather think they both have no one else to blame, but themselves; in thinking that Legolas is a courtesan, because they were in fact both quite eager to assume that he�s one, oh well, forgive me for my rambling!

Anyway, oh, a villain, those are good to have in stories, ouch, troubles lies ahead, me like, hehe! I really hope you�ll continue, because I�d love to read more, therefore please do write more and update soon� Until then, thanks for sharing!

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From ANON - MewMew2 on June 29, 2010
Excellent job. Please update this story once more when you have the chance.
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From tmelange on April 15, 2010
Great beginning! I love the misunderstandings. LOL Write more soon, please. :)
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From ANON - Laz on March 25, 2010
This is really good! Keep it up!
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From Silverfrost on March 24, 2010
Loving this story, can't wait to see what happens next
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