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Reviews for My Dreams, My Heaven

By : Lenoraofthevale
  • From Nuqia_2013 on January 14, 2014
    O wow poor Las
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  • From JirelCahil on January 27, 2010
    For what it's worth - I don't notice many typos and you are able to create pictures of what is happening and tell the story well. I find it hard to review a story until it is several hundred words along because i need a story to review. But your writings not so bad it drives me away and neither is what I have read so far. So I can't give you more info but that's my problem not yours. :)
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  • From Macheil on January 25, 2010
    Thank you for the wonderful chapter. I enjoyed your description of Lass. Can't wait for the next chapter!...Macheil
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  • From Macheil on January 24, 2010
    Leave it to Glorfindel to help Lass understand a few things. Great chapter!....Macheil
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  • From Macheil on January 22, 2010
    Not only is this a great story, but now it's a mystery! I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter.....Macheil :)
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  • From Macheil on January 20, 2010
    Each chapter keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next!....Macheil
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  • From audreen on January 16, 2010
    Very interesting so far. The excessive violence done to poor, defenceless Las was a bit hard for me to swallow but I am sticking around to see how it developes.
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  • From Macheil on January 16, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this story! Please keep writing, you have peeked my interest...lol. Thanks...Macheil
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