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Reviews for Children of the New Kingdom

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Annie on September 19, 2012
    This is a very interesting beginning - you give just enough information without revealing too much, and that makes me want to read more. Furthermore, the language is rich and varied, and the pacing is good enough, so it keeps the action from becoming slow moving. You did a good job so far, and am looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - gginsc on July 07, 2012
    I love the story and am waiting patienly for your update.
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  • From ANON - annette on January 20, 2012
    ooohh love the story so far! I would love if you updated! :) i voraciously read everything you write!! :) now i wonder who that brown wizard was and where did he come from?!
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  • From ANON - KarenLioncourt on March 25, 2011
    I read it and I loved it. Will definitely read more should you happen to update:)
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  • From phatangelbaby on August 25, 2010
    Interesting story. I very much like the way the story is coming about. Please update soon.
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  • From SilentNiobe on August 11, 2010
    I have really enjoyed the first two chapters of your story and was wondering whether you are going to continue writing it... I am anxiously waiting for an update!
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  • From Recordkeeper on June 24, 2010
    interesting story. i think it can be a good one. your style is alright. dialogue is believable. No large spelling or grammatical errors. different love interests thrown into the mix. im interested to see where you take it.
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  • From SilentNiobe on April 29, 2010
    This seems like a very interesting story! I honestly wonder why there are no reviews yet! I especially like the way you have kept true to the way they speak and behave, since it's a trap many fanfiction writers fall into. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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