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Reviews for Faded Light: Book II

By : Laurin
  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2010
    So much is starting to come together now, and the tension is getting stronger. I find myself very eager to see what lies ahead!
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  • From ziggystardust3 on December 08, 2010
    I was so pleased to see this updated! And htree chapters I had not read- brilliant. Legolas' despair is dangerous indeed and you are setting up the next bit very nicely.
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  • From ANON - Del on December 08, 2010
    Yes! I finally feel as though the truth is getting closer to being uncovered! I can't wait for the next chapter...and all those chapters you mentioned! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 07, 2010
    Oh my! What a tease haha. I want them to figure it out so badly!!!! hahaha I love being on edge though. So happy you have some of the sequel chapters coming up. Very excited. Keep up the excellent work! You are brilliant! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2010
    Oh, it is painful to see him despair like this, so much so that he is shutting Mel out. You really convey his inner bleakness so well.
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  • From ANON - Del on December 05, 2010
    Ohhh.the story is moving up! Another nice chapter. I't quite late for me to try to make a more coherent review, but please keep up the good work! (I come here daily to see if you updated! :) )
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 04, 2010
    Yay! This story always makes my day. Especially the really long chapters that are like parts 1-3. please continue! i want so badly for legolas to get home and see benain/novnorian and realize its his son.
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  • From ANON - Del on November 25, 2010
    Lovely chapter! I like Benain...but that is probably because since you first mentioned his birth I hoped he had survived...and was elated when you mentioned he did. Though, poor child! First he looses his father, then his adoptive mother, then he becomes a slave and now he is in the middle of this conspiracy for the throne...I think he deserves a rest (hint: give him back his father......LOL). I really like this story...but it is so sad I had to take a break and go read a sappy romance one! Still, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2010
    I have to say, this was short but very telling. The growing bond between Ithilhen and Benain is heartwarming, although Benain's dreams where he thinks he sees his father are wrenching, since his father was told he was dead. This perspective feels important, though, and I'm sure it will become so in future chapters. Lovely foreshadowing...

    Enjoy the holidays!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2010
    I am finally getting around to reviewing this, after feeling guilty for reading it and not reviewing promptly.

    This is truly well done, and I second the other reviewers in saying that I like seeing Legolas remain a warrior, strong and fierce when he needs to be fierce. And yes, the distance you maintain by referring to him as the slave, or Dafi, is extremely chilling and effective.

    Marvelous, really! :)
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  • From ANON - Del on November 18, 2010
    Well, I'm really happy for once I got hooked on a fic that gets regularly updated! And it is so good. Poor Legolas, ever before being a slave he had horrible experiences. I'm getting even more curious about how this story will continue! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Del on November 17, 2010
    I just found your story...and I got instanly hooked! So please keep up with it! I can't wait for Legolas to meet his family again! And to a new perspective on his time in the fellowship and his children!
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  • From ziggystardust3 on November 12, 2010
    You always manage to get such fear and tension into your writing-no exception this time either.
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  • From ziggystardust3 on October 28, 2010
    As a;ways, nicely done with this third person pov of Legolas. I liked the idea of his leaving a gift. Very moving, and yes, you are succeeding in making him strng and not a silly girly creature with 'cerulean orbs' and 'alabaster skin' - I can't bear that either.
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  • From ziggystardust3 on October 26, 2010
    I think this chapter was lovely- very touching with Legolas speaking of his father, and all the fear and helplessness of his slavery. And of course Mel makes him particularly vulnerable but if anyone dares hurt her they might find the compliant slave they have grown used to, is still an elven warrior at heart, and a father. It's strange because I really don't like mpregs at all but this is done with a purpose and with the plot in mind.And it works so well and is so well written.
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