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Reviews for Deeper than breathing

By : ziggystardust3
  • From ANON - anonanon on November 01, 2010
    Here Here for Elf worship! Excellent job on the battle scene, those are certainly not easy to wright, and you did a fantastic job. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on October 30, 2010
    Thank you so much for updating this wonderful story! The concept of the elves and their deeper connection to nature has always been a particularly alluring one that is often the envy of mankind on some level, having that characteristic so 'involved' with the storyline, really adds to it. Please update once more when you have the time and inspiration to do so.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 27, 2010
    Creepy. Excellent job on this chapter, your usage of vocabulary to illustrate the rising tension is spectacular. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 15, 2010
    Interesting. I gotta say, I liked the scene at the end in particular with Legolas looking between siblings in particular. Thank you so much for updating your wonderful story once more!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 14, 2010
    Thank you so much for reading my review! I know some authors merely like to see the number of reviews and don't actually read them, so thanks. 0//0 You did a great job of wrapping up the conflict with Grima, both inner and outer, I always thought of him as yes, a 'bad man' with foul intentions, but not a necessarily 'evil' one. Please update once more when you have the time and /or inspiration.
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  • From pip on October 14, 2010
    Chapter Four

    Oh, I am glad Grima is dead, though I do feel a little sorry for him. I am eager to read what is happening in the dungeons now. I wonder if Eomer has finished cursing Legolas yet? *laughs*
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  • From pip on October 14, 2010
    Chapter Three

    Your Legolas has me completely captivated, and the trick he played on Eomer shows that he does know his effect on those around him. Nice!

    Pip :)
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  • From ANON - rozzan on October 14, 2010
    Just read CH 1. Lovely accomplished start to the story and good use of langauge description and emotion. I already like your Eomer and Grima and of course Legolas is simply wonderful. Great idea, looking forward to reading more when I have time.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 12, 2010
    Interesting, I like this different take on this section of the LOTOR timeline. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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  • From pip on October 04, 2010
    Oh, the tattoos.... you make me want Legolas myself, and I do feel some sympathy even for Grima - he couldn't help drooling *g* Poor Eomer though, and what a cruel choice for Grima to put before him. Wonderful, well-written and engaging. I did see one thing that threw me a little though; a repeated word choice somewhere (goes back to look for it).

    Here: [...] so close he could feel his hot breath, smell the rancid stink of his breath.

    Thank you for this fic! :)
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  • From pip on October 04, 2010
    Chapter One:

    I think I shall review here too, because this story really deserves it. You have a wonderful way of writing, and from the first chapter I have to say how much I love your Legolas; he's so bewitching and mysterious, and I am sure he is aware of it too. Grima is done fantastically well, and I can see him in your descriptions perfectly. Also I have to say I adore the little bit about the song, and how Grima has forgotten his.. reminds me a little of the beginning of the Silmarillion.

    Pip :)
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