rate_review Reviews

wow! this is really good, really well written - and i don't usually like real person fic very much, but i was really into this one! well done. i used to be obsessed with Shoebox Project (harry potter extended fic) for its amazing writing, realistic dialogue and random situations - as well as the obvious sexual tension between pretty boys - but i can see that your stuff might replace the space vacated in my heart by the infrequent postings of shoebox....

oh! oh! i hate you! i love you! why is your dialogue so good, hm? WHY?! yes, yes, yes, i REALLY like this fic. A LOT. very VERY excellent. thanks heaps. i love that you're not OTT with the description, but that the description you give is so perfect. thank YOU!

You rock. This is one of my top-ten-favorite Billy/Dom fics. I'm such a sucker for the sweet adorable fics and this is one of the best :).

I don't think anything written about Dom and Billy could be anything other than cute... Sweet and enjoyable, nice one.

That's quite a bit of description. I like it, especially the way you describe the muscles in the face and body moving. It makes everything seem clearer.

I really enjoyed reading this. in fact, everything you've posted! So superbly written. I enjoy the observation of all those little details.. :) Brilliant, can't wait to read more..