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schedule
October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's off to a great start. All you need to do is write more and finish it. E-mail me if you want to chat.
schedule
October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Umm no offense but your story was kinda confusing. Upgrade the story and maybe explain more of it. Good Luck with the story!