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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, you paste the story twice.
Seccond. It was beautiful.
I love what I read.
Sivan
Seccond. It was beautiful.
I love what I read.
Sivan
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was so touching. Especially the beginning. I hope you write more stories like this. |^_^|
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice, and well-written compared to the majority. The story was simple and I prefer more character interaction, maybe even dwell more on romance (as long as it's not an MS or fangirl fantasy OC) , but you did project the mood well, and I could appreciate the characters' voices. I'd like to see you tackle a more in-depth and longer story, if you're of the mind.