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for In the Darkness

by AlarynDrei

schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was cute ^_^ there should be more chapters, you captured the characters personlity quite well (well the talking bit anyways, i dont know if they did do that kinda thing, but there was alot of hanky panky in those bushes outside frodo's house). It would be interesting to see a s a second chapter would look like. keep up the writing.

ps. Tnx for the review.

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