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person MerenwenFefalas

schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Oh. Dear. God.

Normally, I like to leave constructive criticism, but since I've just had to bleach my eyeballs, I doubt I'll be doing that with this fic.

While I love the concept of Orlando Bloom/Legolas, I will agree with a previous reviewer and say that you did not do a good job of writing it. To each her own, however, and you are entitled to write what you will.

Cheers,
Sonja.

person loveforelves

schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM

ur ri cha chapter 9 is inspired by that story, i have put that also at the bottom of that chapter with a short explanation ;)

person Christina G.

schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM

There are quite a few parts of this fic that reminds me of Karla's "A Silent Surprise". Can't remember if you made mantion of her fic or not. But it's obviously a major inspiration for this fic. Hope there aren't anymore insidenses where the ploce need to be called.

person Christina G.

schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Gah! I can't believe my review showed up like that! i know for a fact it did not have that many spelling errors! More Elves added in the story? Oh my! That does sound wonderful! I love the Twins! They are just the best. I've had many threesome fantasies about them. Of course i'm the third party! *growls* Us cats just love all that attention! ^_~

person Micky