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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a story. I adore Billy since the day I've met him and Sean is my Love from the very first movie on. First, I had to get into your writing. With all the repeatings and things but now I love it.
But I have to admit, and this is no flame at all, that the last two chapters lost a bit of its intensity I loved about all the other chapters. Maybe it's just my, I am not really into the whole Daddy thingt stt still, you almost had me crying at the end of chappie aahem 17? (last one) when Sean lost it and came first. Lovely, lovely Sean in tears, hehe.
Anyway, keep on writing but I hope this will be no soap opera and you'll find a proper end, which suits this lovely pairing.
Regards
Marius
But I have to admit, and this is no flame at all, that the last two chapters lost a bit of its intensity I loved about all the other chapters. Maybe it's just my, I am not really into the whole Daddy thingt stt still, you almost had me crying at the end of chappie aahem 17? (last one) when Sean lost it and came first. Lovely, lovely Sean in tears, hehe.
Anyway, keep on writing but I hope this will be no soap opera and you'll find a proper end, which suits this lovely pairing.
Regards
Marius
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chappie! I'm very fond of Needy!Billy and Unsure!Sean - eagerly awaiting the next chapter here. :)
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* *GURGLE* Oh my god. You have rendered me practically speechless. (Quite a feat, mind.) Beautifully written. I truly had no idea that I had a Sean/Billy Daddy!Kink. It appears that I very, very definatley do. Don't stop writing.
luvs,
shimmer
luvs,
shimmer
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*reads chapter six eagerly* I've just glomped the first six chappiesve tve them, and I can't wait to read the rest. :D So sorry I haven't reviewed "To Capture..." lately, but time has been very short. I *will* catch up with it.
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad you loved it! Yes, there is more. The response has been so good I may make quite a little tale of this. Thank you so much for your review.
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you like it and yes, there will be more. Hopefully much more.