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person KnowInsight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins*
That was really, really, really good. *smirks*
More? Hell yes!
Tenna' ento lye omenta.
Am ^_^
person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! omg that scene with the twins was so funny! I was literaly really to roll on the groud laughing. :) Glad you put it in there. A little humor in a serious fic is always good sometimes, especially since life isn't always completly serious. :) I'll have to add aff.net to my favorites list :) never used it before. The last sentence "you have no idea..." that little scene, funny too. Though not funny where your laughing your ass off, but a knowing smile sort of thing. :) cute I must say with arwen teasing legolas, such a sister like thing to do. :) too bad they aren't really brother and sister. :) I liked how you made the connections in this chaptThouThough I knew what you meant because you told me already, but now I can clearly also see it in the fic, and that will be very helpful for others who do not get the chance of talking to you before reading. :) Keep writing, as I know you have much planed! :)
Brenda
person earth-guide
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I really liked it. I started reading the Haldir on "Crux of the Problem" and granted I have only read the first chapter but I find that I am a little bit confused. Er...what happened between the dream sequence at the end of chapter 14 and janessa and Legolas looking for an elf for a threesome?
Did I miss something? Let me know because I really wish to get caught up if I can :)
the earth guide
person Phoenix Lumen
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon.
person Aranel3
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those twins just crack me up!
*imagining legolas waking me up*
ah
person Aranel3
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T twi twins just crack me up!
*imagining legolas waking me up*
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person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. I could see a few lines that connected to real life. Some were funny too. :) You picked good songs for this chapter. Write more. :) now I just have your other chapters to catch up for the other fic. :)
Brenda
person KnowInsight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*amused smirks*
Looking forward to more luv.
Adios.
Am ^_^
person Just me
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Pester.
person Miss Independent3
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I like this chapter. It's funny. But bring Janessa and Legolas together already! Or at least let them meet each other or something! I'm getting impatiant. lol

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